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From Daddy, With Love

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From Daddy, With Love

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

My Babygal

"My Babygal"

I never knew what love was, until 2002/
When your mother, gave birth to you
Two beautiful eyes, with a smile like mine/
You gave my life purpose, and the words to rhyme
So when a verse get rhymed, my mind thinks you/
In every bar and every line, and every word is true
I'm really proud of you, and I'm so lucky to have/
You as my daughter, and to be called your dad
From the minute you born, you were in my pad/
You gave me happiness, when what was sad
You gave me the drive, when my tyres were flat/
So until the day that I die, I thank you for that
I love you more than life, more than poems and rap/
Because you are my life, and the only reason that/
I keep rapping & rhyming, til my names on the map/
And when it is, as a gift, I'll be giving you just that.

Copyright 2016 The Elusive Mr Dunne
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