To the author

"Hi. Is this still up?"

Why did it have to end?

"I desperately hope the author is still writing this. The snippet caught me and by the third chapter, I was in deep. Loveable characters, fascinating setting, and a plot that's just gotten started. I look forward to more!"

"null"

Underfoot

"I loved the story the girls story was strong the prince was like anything odd. The world well imagined the place I can feel the fear it is well conceived and plotted there I so much in it that it is awesome but the only trouble was the ever ending new character in the plot. But what was marvellous was the whole situation of this child having nightmares and not being able to react as a human being. I think when she was attacked she could not even say a word about it otherwise she too would be in the same predicament. Which is a interesting concept what would anyone else do?"

"Underfoot"

"Timerie, well done..........fast moving story, the plot well defined with the story closely following the direction of such...........Grammar and punctuation and sentence structure very good. The character development well explained as the blending of numerous new characters appeared as the son and mother fled the enforcers, reaching the topside. Mother caught and the Son hiding in the bathroom or closet cubby hole left him helpless and never to see his Mother again.........excellent work...........continue.................. william elliott kern Dead or Alive; https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550"

Underfoot

"This is an exciting, breath holding story and I can't wait to finish it. This has kept me reading chapter after chapter until I am blurry eyed. Well written."

A fun read!

"There's a lot of potential in the plot. Great ideas and the author knows how to move the story along and keep the reader engaged. Listed as "Complete" but the story is incomplete. Characters and writing style could use more depth and development."