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Love on Safari

"I love the MCs sassy character and Odek's caring nature, most of all I love the holiday mood. Such a good read. Impatiently waiting for more! It sucks you right in like you're on holidays with them 😍❤️ can't wait for them to have some adventures together heheh! More please!!! "

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Love it!

"I really enjoyed this story! The plot is cute and isn't rushing too quickly, which is a problem a lot of romances have. There's a good balance here where it's slow enough that it's believable but not so slow that it gets painstaking/boring. The characters are fun, but my only criticism is Darren doesn't seem to have any flaws. Keshi clearly has self esteem issues, but Darren is this seemingly perfect guy - so I'm hoping that we'll see a bit more of his flaws come out since he is human after all. I enjoy the plot, however if this romance is the only story arch in the book I could see it getting monotonous, so I hope there is something added (like smaller story archs spread throughout as we go through the main one) to keep it interesting. I love all the facts about Kenyan history and culture spread throughout too, I can tell you put a lot of thought into this. Also, the writing style is beautiful and technically very sound. I only saw one or two grammatical errors, so nothing crazy. Very engaging style, thick descriptions, and enticing characters. Awesome job and keep it up!"

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Great read

"It's a great read..can't wait for more ...🤩"

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Love on Safari

"I like everything about it .it's a straightforward with easy grammar. makes u imagine urself being a part of the story. I would recommend it to anyone I rated this because it deserves the best of rates."

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Love on the Safari

"I love how the author describes situations and allows the words to flow smoothly. The characters have depth and move you as you get to learn more about them. I can't wait to see how the story progresses!"

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Cant wait for the rest of the novel

"I love it…can’t wait for the rest of the chapters"

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I love every chapter

"I love the progressive development of the story accompanied with vivid description which gives a reader a clear visual image of the characters and their surrounding. The Novel is recommended to all book lovers,it will have your imagination running wild. Warm regards, Kashu, Calista's number one fan."

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Amazing

"It's an amazing story. Excellent description, good grammar, wonderful plot. The author has done a good job and we are waiting for more. thumbs up"

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Love On Safari

"I really love this book. I love that it's not cliche at all, always giving the unexpected. "

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Love on Safari

"It's a really good story. I can't wait to read the next chapter and what happens between Darren and Keshi"

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Great

"I'm interested in seeing how Keshi`s relationship with Darren will develop. Up until now, the book kept me entertained and expecting the next chapters. Good job author."

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Enticing

"This story hooks you in right away and leaves you wanting more. Well crafted, leaving you wanting to read more. Upset there's only three chapters. Thank you, Author for writing this. A must read."

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Interesting

"Grammar and spelling are on point. Interesting plot. I would love to read more! "

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Fantastic

"I love the writing skills of the author. There is no need of any kind of explanation how good it is.... can't wait for the rest."

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Absolutely amazing

"Wow this book is amazing and I can't wait for the next chapters.This is like an adventure for me."

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Love On Safari

"I love Darren's character– a man who doesn't do one night stands. He's a fresh difference from other book characters, a difference we are all interested in. Awesome start.🧡"

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Love on a Safari

"I really like the idea of the story and the way you describe everything. It seems real and I am looking forward for more chapters. "

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Great

"Okay I just started and I'm already into the story, great work author. You make it sound so real and I'm looking forward to more chapters. 👏 "

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