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Band to Bubbles

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Summary

"Band to Bubbles" is a sweet and simple poem that shares the many different adventures of a little girl and a little boy. In a short yet lasting way, the poem showcases the spunk, curiosity, and imagination of children from a third-person point of view.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Band to Bubbles

S. R. Gabriels


She taps pots and pans with long

wooden spoons. A flashy


colander toddles on her head, stylish.

A fashion statement. His feet patter


down the hall to join her band.

He's a pro at the whisk, a mini


conductor since three. Encores end

when members dance outside. They race


from sidewalk to sidewalk. She

tiptoes along, never


on the cracks. She wins, tears streaming

down his face. But he giggles


when the grass tickles his knees, his eyes wide

as the worm wiggles away. She colors the sky


with chalks of purple and orange, a gorgeous

pink sunset. Under the sunset, a road. His tiny trucks


drive the winding trail. She finds bottles

of bubbles and smiles at the sparkly


prisms bouncing off sunbeams. He watches

the wobbling spheres pop. And a piece


of unattended chalk rolls down the drive.
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