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Review of The Sum of All Kisses

"Overall, so far, this book screams Pride and Prejudice to me (which is one of my favorite books). The era in which the book takes place is similar, the standards in which people have to uphold is similar, and the writing is phenomenal! The book is set in the past, but in no means does Kate want it to stay like that. From the introduction, you can tell she is not one to have her ways with society's standards, so it is no surprise to me when I found out her secret. This novel weaves through lots of themes such as love, class, societal standards, reputations, family values, and integrity, making it something that all readers could fall in love with! Some critiques I do have though, are that there are some errors in the technical writing that I have seen, such as missing a quotation mark, not having spaces between words, not using a semi-colon when needed. However, those are such little mistakes that most people would not realize! I just am what people call a "grammar nazi" - it is my kryptonite. As for the writing style, I love it, however, sometimes it was difficult to follow in the beginning as it would jump from first to third person. It was easy to catch on to though!"

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A story that begins brightly

"I'm French, so it's not always easy to get into English reading. But here, I must admit that I liked the story quite quickly... It took me a little while to understand what Kate was doing (I won't say more to not spoil future readers), but that makes things very interesting! I thought at first that it was just a role, and that everyone knew, but no! What a character! And John's attitude towards Kate as well... A fine observer! And what a kiss! A great start to the novel! I can't wait to know more and read the rest! :-) That's a good read! :-)"

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Give it a go! Promise it won't dissapoint.

"From an author's perspective, I think that is a good book. It gets better with each revision and each new chapter added. Give it a go and let me know what you think!"

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Amazing!!!

"I find myself wanting to read more chapter, that is how intriguing it is... I love it Author, good work, this is well written and punctuations where it supposed to be. I love Katherine toooo ❤ 😍 "

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A darn good piece of writing!

"I was immediately drawn in by the writing style, and the dialogues were just so beautiful. But as I progressed into the story, I noticed that you kept repeating the same thing repeatedly, which, for me, was tiring and boring as well. I also noticed a couple of grammatic and punctuation error scattered throughout the novel, but that didn't disrupt the pace of the story. This was such a good read!"

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The Sum Of All Kisses

"Overall I found the book interesting and enjoyable. The character of Katherine is very intriguing! The later addition of Sir John draws the reader in and ties the plot together nicely. The chapters are very well divided and leave the reader wanting to read more—overall, an excellent read. I would suggest proofreading line by line to avoid simple errors that take away from the story, such as tenses and diction. Thanks for the chance to read your book and for inviting me to do so. LF6"

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