LilyFinch6

The Sum Of All Kisses

Overall I found the book interesting and enjoyable. The character of Katherine is very intriguing! The later addition of Sir John draws the reader in and ties the plot together nicely. The chapters are very well divided and leave the reader wanting to read more—overall, an excellent read. I would suggest proofreading line by line to avoid simple errors that take away from the story, such as tenses and diction. Thanks for the chance to read your book and for inviting me to do so. LF6

Behind the Barrier

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, even though sci-fi is not my genre. It made me anxious about what was behind that glass; I liked the line of smoke and mirrors and the reference to God forgetting this part of the universe. Sometimes the similes were hard to follow at different times. Other than that, I look forward to your next chapter, Behind the Barrier, as the title suggests. LF6

The Monster

Outside of a few grammatical errors, I liked the story. I found the plot engaging and rich. I realize that editing my work is challenging, but I find that when it is online, I am more apt to do so. I see my errors, and then I provoke feedback.
I believe Dr. J made a mistake. What do you think?