What is your opinion?
THE DEVIL'S CAMPUS
"Wow freaky love it hopefully he can stop her from killing more people going to go look to see if there is more to this book thank you for the great read "
Mysterious and Exciting
"I'll do myself a review. I think it's good, it has a wonderful concept"
Dark and Thrilling!
"Loving this story! It’s dark, scary, mature, and gruesome. It has everything that a horror story should have. The author has clearly planed this out carefully. The characters are enigmatic and each character has their own personality. Good job. I recommend it for those who like a good dark book."
Amaizing!
"I enjoyed the story. I was so engrossed throughout. Good job!"
Great Job
"Your story has a nice quality of grammar, good narration, elevating settings with nice characters. Keep it up author."
The story is more fun and the ending good"happy ending"
"What I liked about this story is that it has a happy ending...though the author had no company at least the voices and scary sounds were gone."
A good old horror story
"I'll start with the things I didn't like. As petty as it may sound, editing matters. Chapters that end in the middle of sentence, chapters repeated - you can't have that in a story. That's why I rate the writer's skills with two stars. The writer should sit down and work on it (it seems like he would). The plot of having ritual killings every now and then on the university grounds seems illogical to me. Imagine that in real life. The university would have been closed. BUT this is a common feature for the whole genre so I get the author is writing within the genre limits, and it's fine. The author is actually doing a pretty fine job darkening the atmosphere from the beginning with the crow. Enter the crow. Crows, ravens, black birds in general are a great symbol of a pending change, often for the worst. I also appreciate the fine little details throughout the story, some questions the characters ask which are logical to ask, but most writers would not include them in the narrative. This way the writers makes it all the way more believable. Hence the four and five stars rating for everything else. Had the punctuation, editing etc. been great, it would have reflected in the writing style and overall rating and I would have given it all star rating. I like the story itself. Please, author, hone your editing skills and let your story shine!"
Great Concept
"For anyone that likes horror, you could definitely get into this one. It has all of the main themes, mystery, gore, sex and a young main character. The grammar does not take away from the story, but there are some edits that should happen throughout for better flow. Aside from that, nothing is too cliche that it would make you feel like it's a story on repeat. It has genuine mystery and another common theme: crows! There is a reason authors and directors use them in their art. The overall thematic changes should be a little more flushed out. The scenes are just a tad bit abrupt and then something else is happening, so it would be good to just add some meat to these story bones throughout. Also, if you really like the unexpected, I was not ready for the second chapter! The story gets going very quickly which is very nice for anyone ready to delve into this campus horror novel. Hopefully the main character makes it out alive! Overall, the concept is engaging for horror fans and after some nice edits and work, this could be a great addition to anyone's library of terror. "
