What is your opinion?
What a unique take 😍
"First I want to take a moment and say that if anyone is thinking of starting this book, definitely give it a chance and do not look at the reviews. It's one thing to give constructive criticism and another to be unnecessarily rude trying to act like you're being helpful. Now back to it, this had quite the unique storyline. Started off normal making me think of any other family drama plot, but then it took turns I didn't expect. It did grow confusing at times when I wasn't sure what was happening next but I can see its better for the story to flow fast. It'll just take more practice to perfect this. All in all, can't wait finish. Good job author 💯"
Pleasant read
"I really enjoyed reading your work. It all flowed really well and I could imagine it all happening as you gave enough descriptions."
Great Story so far!
"Loving the chapters that are released thus far. I haven’t read a vampire book for quite sometime so am looking forward to your take on the vampire world. "
Wow
"This one is a great read. Plus, I love everything related to vampires! Can't wait for more."
Infinity
"Interesting read. Very original storyline. Likeable characters."
Infinity
"Firstly, do you use a program to check your spelling? Secondly, did you take a look at the writing rules? For example; if someone speaks and another person replies, you start a new paragraph. It indicates someone else is speaking. And lastly, try to describe the surroundings every time your main character finds herself in a different situation. For the reader it's more or less a white room at the moment. I would suggest to rewrite your story, using the three pointers, and post a chapter on critique circle (website) for feedback. I hope this will help you! Good luck on your writing journey :)"
