What is your opinion?
Appreciation and Commission Request
"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "
Fgjih
"Beautiful story and lovely people I can’t wait to read the next chapter x"
Moon rise
"I really like your book and the plot seems to good in a right direction. I would advise you not get carried away with too much description. Some people are easily bored with describing too many things, they want the story. Otherwise it is a good book keep up the good work and it is intriguing. Oh also don't disclose too much information on your summary but your book is certainly intriguing "
My thoughts.
"Okay. A decent story. Maybe not the best of the best but pretty good nonetheless. I felt maybe more intimacy could work. There was also the issue of the parents not being capitalized and a paragraph split in two at one point. But hey we all have things to work on. Hope you'll read my stories at some point. They're all connected. "
Not bed but needs major work at the ending
"Ok the story was good until the very end I thought was very stupid to end it that way.. u defintly need to work on yur ending .. but other then that is was really good"
I love it!
"It was very detailed! I really liked that. The beginning of the story was very well written, and it's important to have that so your readers aren't bored. I think you did that very well! You did a really good job! There were some confusing parts in the book, but you can probably smooth those out easily. But, some authors want confusion, so if that's what you're going for, then don't worry about it. Anyway, I found it an incredible read, and I hope you continue to write, and I wish you all the best in the future!💖"
