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A Poetry Collection With a Gloomy Nature Cover So You Know it's Serious

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Summary

When I fall into a glorious pit of self-pity, I sit in a dimly lit room, listen to sophisticated music, and write emotionally raw poems that bring tears to my eyes. Then I read them over and over again and think to myself, "wow, that's so profound." Then, I read them again weeks later and think to myself, "you really do like to overreact." Join me on my exploration of the inner self, authentic emotions, and unapologetic attention-seeking as I share my art, my gift, my poetry.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Jean Dall
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Lament to the Desert

Father time will stop for no one

Yet for you he will slow to a crawl

And I approach timidly requesting solitude

The embrace of a tender wall


As the deer panteth for the streams

So I do for red wine

But it slips and slides through my fingers

And in its reflection I see my decline


Though you hold no one’s soul forever

Won’t you grasp mine for awhile

Four more days of your purgatory

Before with life I reconcile


As the deer panteth for the streams

So I do for poison rich and fine

But it leaves me gasping for my air

And in its destruction I glimpse mine


Is it wrong for the fawn to take refuge in the glen?

And am I at fault for my circumstance or how I was led then?

And when the illusion it did break, did you know our Lord did grin saying

“Child why would I grant to you what was pursued in sin”


As the deer panteth for the streams

So I do for idolatry undivine

But it crumbles upon my touch

And all that’s left to do is pine


As I kick your silver dust to watch it fly away

And gaze your endless horizon cradling both the night and the day

I ponder the life ahead

Asking once more if I may stay


As the deer panteth for the streams

So I do for compassion, that of thine

But the time nears when I must leave you

And wonder at the result of my malign


As the deer panteth, so I do

As the deer panteth, so is how I will miss you

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