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A Heartbreaking Tale of Despair
"I confess I've only read the first eight chapters so far, and yet you can really feel the angst, depression, and heartbreak that the characters have. It's a very realistic portrayal of these emotions and the inner conflict a lot of us humans feel after suffering through repeated painful experiences."
Simple
"But very concise. It's rare to see poetry this way now, and it's effective."
Outstanding! Beautiful
"I truly enjoyed this. The author has a wonderful way to dance with words and mingle with emotions! Amazing job. Highly recommended. 😍"
Sad and depressing.
"Didn't like the story but I'm sure others would."
