What is your opinion?
𝐿𝑜𝑣𝑒.
"The cover 😩 I’m already falling in love with Angela’s personality and the way she explains her life in the beginning. Shows you rich people don’t have it all sometimes. The only thing I’d advise is to use more commas and there’s a few misspells but not enough to not get me hooked. Overall, this seems like it’ll be a wonderful story and I encourage most to give it a try. Your a wonderful writer ♡ ~urlocalamateurwriter"
Great
"So the cover is to die for. With that said the story has a few grammatical problems but none to big that it takes away focus. Plus fuck commas. Either way the plot is amazing and would read it for the plot alone."
Good one
"I like this story so much... The character of Andrew seems to be mysterious but i really want to know how would Luke and Andrew would look if they were real human "
Captivating
"Only one chapter in and I'm already interested to see where it's headed. I love the main character (Angela Brown) so far, I adore the fact that she stands up for herself and has an attitude with claws. I'm intrigued about Andrew too, he seems rather mysterious and smart too. Lovely start. The overall rating is definitely a five star."
Dangerous Elysium
"I love how the story is told from the first person. I just think there's just a lil too many spaces in between the paragraphs but, you're an amazing writer :) "
The Dangerous Elysium
"There's only one chapter so far, but it's going great! The only thing I would recommend is smushing your paragraphs together. It's very spaced out, and it fells like you're trying to make it look longer, but other then that, great plot and story! Keep on writing!"
Lovin' it!!! Pretty intriguing if you ask me!
"I loved the Writing style and it's exquisite Plot origin, It's also got this Anticipate- bait embedded in it!! Loved it!! Chapter 2 !!! Let's Goooooo"
