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Eager reader

"Enjoying the story so far"

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Wonderful book

"I really love this book. The plot is different than any I have read. The love between Luke and Bethany grows through out the novel. He helps her with her demons as she helps him with hers. I highly recommend this book"

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Betrayal

"I absolutely loved this book. Thank you for putting God at the center of it all.. Amazing plot and writing style"

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Betrayal

"Get the correct character names when using lifted passages. And the Proofreader REALLY needs to up their game. Other than that, it’s a decent story with lots of plot twists. I’m waiting to see who was the betrayer!"

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Romantic

"I love the suspense, I keep thinking it’s Julie doing this but then again it could be surge to reese. Can I keep reading? Am anxious."

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Betrayal

"Fantastc story, lots of drama, mayhem and intrigue. Also romance, and a little bit of everything else. Good writing except for a few mistakes in wording and punctuation. But with a good rewrite that will get better. Thanks! makapueo65 "

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Story

"Great story and plot. Love the characters "

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Full of suspence

"I do not like romance suspence cause they uk always write some scenes of hero and heroin making out and all but i liked this one"

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Betrayal

"Lived the twist at the end! A good read!"

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Intriguing

"Very well written. Definitely kept you wondering for sure who the killer was though I had my suspicions all along. Good in that there was never enough evidence to proof my suspicions until the end. Loved the doubts and fears between the two main characters. Beautiful love story mixed in with a murder mystery. May have been a few typo errors but nothing that was extreme. Over all I definitely enjoyed the story. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read it. Good job. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your works."

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Betrayal

"It had a great plot. It took you back and forth who might be the killer. Well done."

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Betrayel

"Extremely exciting and keeps you reading "

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Worth the read

"Julie definitely vibed the bad guy and Bethany was annoying at times too. Great story though thanks for sharing x"

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Betrayal

"Finding the culprit, the only one reason i finished reading this story"

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Betrayal

"It's a great novel "

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Good

"Captivating story.. i so hope it gets happy ending though..."

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Betrayal

"Interesting story"

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Review

"Interesting plot, good build up l, however the writing style is very hard to follow especially the dialogue. Often times it gets confusing because it’s not clear who is saying what which makes it hard to understand what’s happening. But I liked the storyline. "

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