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Una historia con mis propios poemas. Disfrutadla!!
El verano pasó,
y una noticia a todos nos llegó.
Nuestro ángel desapareció,
y nunca más volvió.
Es posible que en otro mundo ya esté,
pues él podría todo eso y más merecer.
Él libró todas nuestras batallas,
cuando la situación era desesperada.
Cuando alguien ayuda necesitaba,
él allí acudía con caramelos y agua.
Pero un secreto guardaba,
pues la máscara nunca se quitaba.
Siempre llevaba un antifaz,
que ahora le ayuda a descansar en paz.
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Cora: Decent story. Slightly predictable turn of events but I didn't think at this point it was a possible twist! I enjoy the stream of thought writing style this has, though some proofreading and punctuation could help a few spots. Recommend this for ebooks and forgive a few confusing errors. Enjoyable t...
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dtjenkins5: A good read with all the complexities of relationships. The twists and turns of the plot add a special dimension.
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virgie: Dane was the dream come true. Luna was too young to understand the mate bond. Dane was patient. The fact that she looked similar to his first love was a distraction. Thanks for the entertainment.
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libaHuntJT9: With good plots n turns. Good rainy afternoon book.
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Caroline Lawson: This is really high quality writing. The plot is complicated and the characters well developed. It’s the best I’ve read yet!
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sengmanymany: Très belle histoire , il y a de moment drôlesEt touchants
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Theresa: Very well written. Scary part is that girls and boys are indeed even today sold for sex.The ones who save them don't get enough credit for their bravery.
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Interesante poema, con una idea que avanza en el texto, sin embargo, el paso de los versos no lo ayuda y se estanca en una sola rima, pasa al principio y al final.