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Una historia con mis propios poemas. Disfrutadla!!
El verano pasó,
y una noticia a todos nos llegó.
Nuestro ángel desapareció,
y nunca más volvió.
Es posible que en otro mundo ya esté,
pues él podría todo eso y más merecer.
Él libró todas nuestras batallas,
cuando la situación era desesperada.
Cuando alguien ayuda necesitaba,
él allí acudía con caramelos y agua.
Pero un secreto guardaba,
pues la máscara nunca se quitaba.
Siempre llevaba un antifaz,
que ahora le ayuda a descansar en paz.
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dtjenkins5: A good read with all the complexities of relationships. The twists and turns of the plot add a special dimension.
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Helhall: Before anything else, I’d like to emphasize that I really did like the overall story. Characters were more than two-dimensional, so definitely a plus. I didn’t even mind the shifting points of view.But...There are a couple of things that made reading the story very difficult.1- Punctuation is your f...
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Jessica Ennis: Beautifully written with engaging dialogue. I loved every part of the book!
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Evtida: It was a very sweet story, but it felt rushed. It didn't really convey the emotions. For example, when the girl was kidnapped, instead of panicking, going crazy, and causing a scene, giving in felt strange... His exaggerated relationship with his gay friend was also odd in my opinion.
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LauraLea: Truly enjoyed this book! I worked with deaf ed in high school so this hit close to home. Will be reading more by this author!!
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Chrissie Aghedo: Great storyline. Left me wanting more for sure. A little different to the others I’ve read so far. Hope there is or will be a next part to this story
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Interesante poema, con una idea que avanza en el texto, sin embargo, el paso de los versos no lo ayuda y se estanca en una sola rima, pasa al principio y al final.