Rea Holland

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Very Nice

Overall I enjoyed this book. It felt a bit predictable at times and things felt choppy but overall it was good. I enjoyed getting the different POV’s.

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Fantastic

I love the premise of this novel! I like the slow build in the sex department and the slow reveal of her being a surrogate. The characters feel very real and each different. I’m loving this book!

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Nice

This story had very real feeling moments. The struggles
The characters had and their feelings were awesome. The way they spoke drove me a bit nuts, especially with her being an English teacher. The ending was bitter sweet but overall a very nice book.

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Quite Interesting

I enjoyed the premise of this story a lot. I felt like some of the plot points were rushed and/or didn’t quite make sense and I would have liked some more interactions and less time jumps. The drama and suspense though were great. Needs another read through as there were many grammatical errors that made reading it difficult.

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Brilliant

This story was amazing. I loved the characters and how the plot moved. The writing is superb! Definitely a new favorite.

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Absolutely Wonderful

I have never given a perfect review but I love everything about this story! I love the plot and the characters. The attention to detail and the story telling are the best I’ve seen thus far on this site. Amazing job, you are a wonderful writer and I look forward to seeing how the story plays out

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Intriguing

This book was intriguing. I think it was a good length to keep it interesting and I liked the ways the characters interacted. I will admit the darling drove me a bit nuts. Also I feel like there could be more explanation and a better in depth character development. All could be done during a second rewrite. A really great start!

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Hooked!

This book hooked me very quickly. I like how the story builds, it had a lot of Cinderella parallels, and I loved the twists and complex characters. Highly recommend to any fans of erotica!

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Truly Wonderful!

When I started this book I wasn’t sure I would finish it but I’m so glad I did! The plot evolved so well and the characters had some major changes but in the end it all made sense! I found myself so totally taken in by this story, it really was amazing!

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Very original!

I’m loving this idea. The idea of the outcasts and the power they wield is amazing. The story does seem a little fast paced and the characters a little odd but overall I’m enjoying it!

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Very compelling!

The story has a lot of awesome points. I was not expecting the twist with the brother in law! There are quite a few syntax errors and grammar issues and I wish the pacing was a bit slower. But the plot is intriguing and i look forward to the next installment!

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Good story

I really enjoyed this story and it did suck you in. There were some funky jumps and time gaps that could have been smoother. Also, parts of the plot felt rushed. I wish they had taken a bit more time before falling into bed with each other cause it would make the “I love you” more believable. I also wish the situation with the father had been better introduced and flushed out. There were some character inconsistencies too. Like one moment Elizabeth is stubborn and stands up to others, then the next she is caving to whatever anyone wishes her to do. Overall a quick easy read with some great steamy scenes and a fun plot.

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Pretty good story

I like this story for the most part. Could use some better character development and the time line seems a bit choppy sometimes. The plot is really coming along though and I love the character interactions.

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