Thus_Omega

Ceres, California

Work in Progress :Being the daughter of The Rake, and The Last Survivor 2

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The grammar needs to be fixed up a bit. Other than that realy it's a great story. the only thing that I have to ask is that can there be more chapters?

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I love the way you write so much. The overall plot of the story is realy cool. I like how you switch back and forth between the two people. Oh and one last thing if you want to use my character Diane sure go ahead. You just need to know a few things that are either in my story or on my wall at the bottom.
lots of love -Thus_child

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LOL LOVE ITTT

YOU NEED to wright more and you have to make a ship come true for me PLEASE!!!! >-

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