A Super Strong Start
Sensational! As a fan of superheroes, I have to say, you have a real winner of a story so far. I like that you made Allison a Wonder Woman expy, but kept her likable and relate-able in this first chapter. You showed us the Mother while also glancing at the Superhero, which I think is important to help the audience relate to the character more. I also like that you are showing us the baby's superpowers, and by the way, fantastic details there. And of course, defying gender stereotypes by making the wife taller than the husband; that's rare in media, especially superhero media, where women are typically shorter than men. Good job on giving the tall girls some representation there! Will most certainly be looking forward to reading more of your story!
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