Breywar

@Breywar

My name is Brey. I self published a novel at 13 sold like 50 copies and retired. I’m a Chiefs fan, a professional reviewer, and mommy to an 8 year old shih tzu/pug mix.

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Exciting!

This reminds of me a better version of the Uglies: the uglies was one of my favorite books going up, and I absolutely am hooked! I need you to write more now! Your writing is exceptional! I’m super impressed and I can’t wait to keep reading!

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This was short and intriguing!

I really liked this concept for a full length novel! It was a story told exclusively through dialogue, and it was told very well! The grammar was on point! I really like this!

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Really good!

This was super good! I was addicted from beginning to end! And yes I want you to write the scene that was described! There was some awkward wording and punctuation, easy fix! But I really liked this! I don’t read a lot of “Bonnie and Clyde” type novels, so this was super different for me, but I loved it!

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Very interesting!

Bitch: Transformation is a very interesting read. It’s very short and action packed for the most part. There’s still a lot of the story that I don’t understand, but I’m hoping there will be a follow up to fill in the gaps and missing pieces. The writing style is very different in a good way. It was super different than anything I’ve read before. Nothing is handed to you and I enjoyed that aspect.

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