Courtney_B

Preserved in Ink

It's still at the beginning, but I've already come to like the main character. The mc at least appears to be full of depth which never hurts, and it increases my interest in this story. The plot of the story has much potential but is hard to say so early on in the novel. The writing style was unique and clear, but poetic and dramatic and adds to the overall intrigue of the story. If there is anything that really stood out to me, it's how perfect the grammar and technical writing skills seem to be. I found it amazing how I couldn't point out any flaws in the technical skills and I find it impressive the author was able to write in the present tense and stick to it too. Most authors I know of write in the past tense, and when they try to write in the present tense, they tend to switch between past and present. Overall it's the beginnings of what seems to be a great story and I look forward to more updates.

Somewhere Safe

An enjoyable story with likable characters. I liked that the perspective of the story was from the children rather than a soldier. The plot was great and I loved the details. A great story, I would definitely recommend to anyone else.