Jabb
@Jabb
I am a aspiring young author. I love Harry Potter, The Heroes of Olympus, Anne of Green Gables, and Divergent. Thanks!
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I'm HOOKED
This story is intriguing and I can't wait for more! I especially like the suspense in chapter four!
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Coolbeans
The beginning made me a bit weary but the book turned out wonderful! I love how you think the book is going to be sad but its really a happy and sweet story. The bunny's name is hilarious! Love your writing skills! Keep Writing
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Fantastic and Beautiful, chilling
OMG so beautiful its so scary chills run up my spine every time I read it My mom loves it
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So Sweet
Beautiful story I love the thought of Percy and Annabeth adopting demigod children and the end made me tear up!!
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