An enjoyable read.
First and foremost the story flows well, and I am not cringing from grammar and spelling mistakes. The start was a little clunky, I didn't really feel hooked, but after the first chapter things moved with a better progression and I felt myself becoming more immersed in the storyline. Tbh, the only thing I don't like about the book is the cover, purely because of the cover models nipples. Once you see them, you can't not see them, and it gave me the giggles. 4/5 - I enjoyed it a lot, but it doesn't have the pull that would make me want to re-read it again, and again. Thus the four.
Read the story nowA decent read.
I found this book to be a decent read. The story flowed a little choppy to start but seem to improve somewhat as the chapters continued. I would advise the writer to try using a narrative program to listen to their book as that will help them with the sentencing and flow. (Some good free ones are available but I use Amazon polly as it's very realistic and doesn't have the pronunciation issues of free ones.)
Read the story nowAttention grabbing
This story grabs your attention from the start. The plot is great so far and the pacing is good. I can't wait to read more.
Read the story nowAn enjoyable read
This is an enjoyable read, the plot is well done and the story moves at a good pace. The characters have a great depth to their characteristics. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
Read the story nowDidn't put my phone down for a second
I very much enjoyed reading this story. I didn't put my phone down once. The story flowed very well and the plot draws you in. The world building was very well done, it made you feel like apart of the books world. It takes a great writer to achieve that.
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