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Like a light that escapes, melts in the shadows, and marries the darkness, I am only imaginary, watching the sky tear under its colours and the sun trying in vain to catch the moon.

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I liked this story so far and I can’t wait for the next chapters. Although I have nothing to say about the writing skills in general, almost flawless, I’m quite happy to be a regular fanfiction reader, otherwise I would a bit disturbed by the writing style. With these β€œthird person pov” and this sometimes omniscient, sometimes limited narrator, It really looks like more a original story fanfiction for me than a true form novel.

However, like I said, this isn’t anything disturbing, so keep going!

I’ll be looking forward for the next chapters as the plot really intriguing me! ;)

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