Lysander

@LysanderWrites

Hi! I’m Leo (he/him) a teen author with nearly 9 years of writing experience. I’m always open to constructive feedback! This is a safe, inclusive space for everyone! 😊 (I used to be OlisOverture)

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bahut badhiya kahani!

mujhe yeh kahani bahut pasand i! yeh bhavnatmak roop se behad dil ko chhoo lene wali thi! ise padhne mein mujhe bahut maza aaya. main vistrit samiksha likhne mein utni acchi nahin hun, lekin ummeed hai isse pata chalta hai ki mujhe kahani pasand i. (hindi meri matrabhasha nahin hai, isliye kripya kisi bhi galti ke liye kshama karen.)

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The Solari Princess

This story is amazing! It has a unique concept and reading just the prologue Got me excited to read more! I definitely will give a more detailed review when I read more! Great job!!!😁😁😁

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SO GOOD

This story was so sweet and wholesome. Ot brightened my day, no my week! I love this authors writing style. This genuinely made me smile! Good job!

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I LOVED it

I absolutely loved this collection. From the very first poem to the final pages, there was such a clear and emotional evolution woven throughout the chapters. Each piece seemed to build upon the last, creating a journey that felt deeply personal yet incredibly relatable. The progression of emotions was handled beautifully, allowing the reader to truly connect with the author’s thoughts and experiences as they unfolded. As someone who has always been a devoted fan of poetry, I’ve read countless collections over the years, but this one genuinely stood out among many others. There was something uniquely raw and authentic about the writing that made every poem linger in my mind long after I finished reading. The imagery, vulnerability, and emotional honesty gave the work a powerful impact that felt both intimate and universal. Normally, I tend to gravitate toward poetry with strong rhyme schemes, so I’ve often struggled to fully connect with non-rhyming or free verse poems. However, this collection completely changed my perspective. The writing flowed so naturally and carried such emotional weight that rhyme almost felt unnecessary. Every piece had its own rhythm and voice, proving that poetry does not need traditional structure to be moving and memorable. Overall, this was a beautifully crafted collection that left a lasting impression on me. It reminded me why poetry can be such a powerful form of expression, and I would highly recommend it to anyone who appreciates emotional, thought-provoking writing — even readers who may not typically enjoy free verse poetry. (Sorry for the long review, I just really liked it😊)

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Murder Mystery

I really liked this—especially the way the world feels so vivid without being over-explained. You kind of pick things up as you go, and it makes everything feel more real and a little more unsettling at the same time. The setting has this quiet, almost eerie energy to it, like there’s always something just out of sight. I liked how the details were woven in naturally instead of being dumped all at once—it made the story feel more immersive and kept me curious. There were a few moments where I wanted a bit more clarity or depth, but overall it didn’t take away from the experience. If anything, the slightly mysterious feel adds to the tone. Overall, it’s a really engaging read with a strong atmosphere. Definitely worth checking out if you like stories that focus more on mood and subtle world-building.

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Stranded on a Tiny Planet

This novel is amazing! It is well paced with thoughtful worldbuilding! The characters have real emotional depth! This is extremely well written! 10/10 would read again

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The Gauge in the Table

The worldbuilding is vivid and engaging! The characters have real emotional depth and feel human! I love how the author gives credit to their inspo and does a good job with warning about potential triggers! 10/10 would read again!

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In the Night

This story is extremely well written and engaging. The story is strong from the very start. The worldbuilding is engaging and interesting! 10/10 would read again!

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Cannoness Vampire's Pet

I love the worldbuilding! The characters are emotionally compelling and feel real. The worldbuilding is detailed and engaging! I cant wait to read this authors other work!

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