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Beauty and the Beasts

Smooth Rides is a story about Beauty trying to survive a threat trying to kill her and her own love life. Beauty's character is a very typical strong and feisty leading woman. However the author uses this as a base to build Beauty's character. In key moments littered around this novel it is shown that she has a more vulnerable side of her. I do wish to point out that there is a bit of melodrama that occurs. Additionally, there's a sort of sudden emotional changes that happen to Beauty which can be confusing at times. It was like skipping the middle of a plot. I feel like there should have been more build up. Writing wise, I enjoyed your style. There is a bit of run on sentences specifically in first chapter. The sentence in question was her describing her lip gloss. Overall this story has potential and I look forward to see how it goes.

Sarah is Queen and Max is Iconic

I will start of by saying that I love the two main characters. Sarah is so well rounded. She still has her girly side and fully embraces it while also having an independence to her in which I enjoy. Max gives me 'screw gender roles' type of feel which I really hope to see more of. This story could just be collections of Max and Sarah growning up and it still would be gold. I look forward for more.

Pretty Cool

I did enjoy the setting. I don't normally see books set in prison which is welcomed. The relationship between Hector and Jamal is more off and on again like a light a switch. Still, an enjoyable read.

Jellypuff Jake

The protagonist is kinda for my liking but overall I think this has the bearings of a nice story. I don't normally see much interracial books like this but it is a breath of fresh air to see.

Quite Interesting

Enjoyable and would look forward for an update. Keep up the good work