SmileySmith

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Hooked!

Ah! Another one for the favourites list! I love that the gaps are slowly filling themselves in and we aren’t just being TOLD what is happening. I have never read a shifter book before so I am not familiar with the rules and commonalities so this is totally fresh for me. The writing style is wonderful and the characters are intriguing and have depth. You’ve managed to create an entire world and society that is so vivid already in just a few chapters. Really well done and I’m excited to have another book to follow!

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A hidden gem!

What a little gem! This Cinderella story has such a fun and refreshing plot. The characters are intruiging and enchanting, and the author has a great sense of humour. The little flirtations between the characters are adorable. However, my favourite thing about this story is the writing style. She is a master of personification. Some of the descriptions she uses are incredible. I found myself wanting to take screenshots to share which ones I loved the most. Some are them are just stunning. This story has so much potential and I think with a little extra proofreading to fix the little grammar mistakes we writers ALWAYS miss the first time, this could be something really special. It is rare that books end up on my favourites list (I think maybe 25% if that), but this one is going there. I couldn't put it down!

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So beautifully written

Honestly I was blown away by this. The pacing is wonderful. The author is really taking her time laying the groundwork and developing really intriguing and three dimensional characters. The writing style is wonderful. The perfect amount of detail. I feel like I’m there but it in no way takes away from the story. Really exceptional work. Definitely adding this to my favourites list. I have a feeling it’s going to be a slow burn and I am ALL there for it!

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Lovely!

This story is so sweet! I was so pleasantly surprised with the strong ‘show don’t tell’ approach that the author takes. I really believe in letting readers fill in the blanks themselves and this author leaves just enough to the imagination to keep me hooked! I also love the twists and turns! This book is definitely staying in my reading list !

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Interesting start

There are many catching things about this plot. The main character is well developed, and it was nice to see him in different stages of his life and to see his relationships with the wolves grow. What a sad life he has had. The writing style is very different, but not in a bad way. My biggest critique is the spelling and grammar. But that’s nothing that some revisions and editing couldn’t fix. I’m interested to see how he handles a relationship with another person. Will he be able to shift back and forth or is he a full wolf? Lots to find out!

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So good!

I knew I needed to get up at 6:30 this morning but that didn’t stop me from reading this until midnight last night. I couldn’t put it down! I love her relationship with the little prince, and I’m hooked on discovering all of the secrets. Both leads are powerful and confident and both equally intriguing. Fascinated by their relationship!! The writing style is beautifully detailed and poetic. Keep up the great work!

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Binged it!

It’s fun! Super bittersweet to have the female lead be torn between two really good men. The writing is pretty smooth and flows well. I didn’t have any trouble binging all of the chapters. I loved how in depth the author went with the characters inner turmoils. It really brought the characters to life. They are all flawed, which only makes the story more believable. Super good job!

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I like it!

I’m such a sucker for romances. I love how respectful this male lead is. He’s possessive, but never forces her to do anything and accepts her as she is. I can imagine feeling quite inferior if I couldn’t shift and was mated to a Lycan. The pacing is good and the writing got better as the story went on. All in all, very nice!

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Good start

I like the way the author writes her characters. She does a good job with the subtle body language and emotional clues. I’d love to we see the scenes and the environment fleshed our even more. Give me that detail. Make me feel Everything! I’m interested to see how it progresses.

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Strong lead

I love the female lead! She is flawed in so many ways but you can still empathize with her. I like her relationships with the dragons. I wish there was a bit more build up in the relationship between the two leads though Overall I’m enjoying reading it :)

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