Superhero-Stories

Detroit

Hey, I mostly just do fan fics and crossovers..... yes I am obsessed with Spider-Man.

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Thrilling Read.

Wow. I'm a huge Marvel fan, so a story like this is the kind of thing I've thought about doing in real life. This is a amazing story, and I love the addition of the dream! This is THRILLING read (Get it? No? Okay...), and I love it. Don't stop writing, you're an amazing author! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

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❤ Kudos! ❤

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Wow.

Wow. Your story was incredible! I loved it, from the charecters to the plot, it was amazing. There is only one complaint I have: Write more! I hate cliffhangers, and I just need to know what happens. In short, Wow.

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Um...

This fanfiction is absolutely incredible! I love it, especially the depth, all of the refrences, and the entire thing- its just amazing. Please update it, its absolutely awesome, and I need to know what happens next!

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Percy Posidonson :). Wait... Jackson. Son of Jack?

Hey, I'm just commmenting to say: Your story is incredible! I mean, this is literally the topic that my account is about, but man, yours is absolutely incredible! Please, update! (I loved the addon of Hulk being able to sniff him down... my first thought was 'Wait, are you calling Hulk a monster?')

You might be thinking that you can't update it anymore. But you can. Don't you think, at the very least, they'll want to go apologize to Percy? Okay, maybe just Steve, but still! Also, what would happen if Thor gets curoius because of Percy contuniueusly saying that 'their worlds can't mix'? What if Tony wants to know about the half-DNA? What if Clint follows him into camp, (Does he not look like a child of Apollo? Blond hair, blue eyes, shoots a bow? I mean, really, its almost obveoius!) and meets the campers? What if, while in New York, he runs into Your Friendly Neiborhood Spiderman? This story is far from over, you can add dozens of other things!

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Wow. I mean, this has got to be the best fanfiction I have ever read. Its incredible! The plot is in depth, the charecters are how they should be (Thanks for not changing charecters personality! I hate it when people do that.), and the whole story is just amazing. So, to summerize, Wow.

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Love it.

Wow. Just... wow. Can you write a sequal?

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