Tanya Haven

Prague

I go by pen name Tanya Haven. I mainly write poetry about my feelings, or animate in Live 2D. I would appreciate if you gave my books a chance! I’ll happily write you a review on your books.

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Pretty good

So, your rhymes are pretty good and creative. I like those descriptions you use at the end to explain the poems. They're not necessary, but it's still nice to look at and read. However, you sometimes tend to not write “the/a”, words aren't separated or the first letter is not big. Your poems are overall good, but you may need to edit them for better grammar. Once you do it’ll be perfect.
I like how your poems are easily understandable and readable as well. I hope you continue writing more poems, because you do have talent and potential. That's 5 stars from me.

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Amazing!

I love this is already!! I can imagine it being a song that I'd love to hear. How you worked with those lyrics, I think that's just amazing. You all did a really good job! I love the content, how it's written, everything.

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Good

I like the concept, as I've been in a similar situation. I think there could be more poems on it. The author's writing style seems fine, it's easy to read and understand. If you plan to publish something on Amazon for example, I'd avoid emojis and things like that. But if you're writing for yourself, that would probably be fine. I hope you decide to write more poems in the future :)

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