VVRamanWrites

Imaginative

The author has a very coherent and distinct imagination. It was a fun read and different from what I've generally read. The conversations were nice. With the blurb, I came expecting something totally different but it was fun. Definitely did not expect a card game in a story about powerful triplets. However, it was nothing to be disappointed about

Great skill!

I usually read upbeat and humour pieces. I wanted to pick this one to read something different. It was different. Good writing. Too dark a tone for my taste but no flaw in the writing. 100s of works already. I think you should consider publishing mainstream to see where it takes you. All the best!

Short and Hammering the Point

The length turns out to be the plus in this no nonsense story. There is no beating around the bush. The story starts, tells itself and ends in quick time. It is a powerful plot and a pain that anyone can relate to. It is simple to comprehend and something that invokes a universally same feeling. That is a big plus. Could have been a bit longer, narrate the pain a bit more but the introduction of a supernatural theme works (and not as a cliché)