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"A short story with a lot of tingles. This could be very easily made into a longer story or a movie. Some great scary vibes. Would highly recommend giving this one a read. "
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"This story was very good. The way that the story goes makes it very suspenseful."
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"I really liked how short it was, I think that was good way to attract readers. I love how you constructed it, but there were a few grammatical issues. For example, I saw "we" in the book twice when it's in third person. Great book, and I'm glad I took a chance to read it. I will recommend it to my friends."
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"The plot is interesting so far it makes readers wonder why are only 17 years old capture. I do believe you went straight in it a bit to fast you could slow down, but it's your book not mine. The story is interesting can't wait or the next chapter ! Your doing a great job so far keep going !"
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"The plot is good. I really think that you jumped into it a bit quickly, so maybe just slow it down a bit or stretch it out? It also has some very veryyy minor spelling and grammar errors but that's easily fixable and I believe we all do that from time to time. It wasn't that realistic, but of course, it's fiction. I don't think the girls would jump up and go with him, especially since they were already getting creepy vibes from him, but overall, the plot and story is good and intriguing. "
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"The first paragraph hooked me in. Literally. It's like the news. After receiving this piece of information, the readers then go on to read about the daily lives of normal 17-year-olds. From the moment the creepy guy was introduced, I immediately thought: "That's the killer (murderer might be a tad bit harsh)." A very well done short story. Bravo. The cliff hanger at the end... Readers can imagine how it goes."
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"I’m not really interested in horror stories, but this one I’m really excited about!! I love the plot and it went into a great detail in what was happening! I really love it! It’s an overall great novel without any mistakes. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!❤️🤞👍🤗❤️"
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"The author has my attention which is tough to do with horror. Excited to read further. "
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"The story holds promise. The plot can be expanded and the characters can be more rounded. The setting, as well as the grammar needs help. But after editing I know it can be a more rounded, better written short story. "
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"I am only rating it overall four stars because there isn't much to go off of yet. It is good so far though, you should continue it. I do think that you seemed to jump into it too quickly, you should probably, in my opinion, give more of a story before this. It is good though."
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"Not bad.... I like the plot of the story to be precise n intriguing.... Besides it's quite a suspence thrilling story leaving the readers to wonderland lol..... "