The Time Watcher

@jinkenra21surya

Ohayo 🐈 guys!. Hope your day be beautiful just like you. Don't forget to thank God for everything you have and have a nice day!. my discord username! anmar111 https://discord.com/invite/JtWc798s

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Love or loyalty book: 2

This time it's more good!. But you just need to organize what happen next and think it through more. From what I see you kind of just write what you think of this second without thinking about it too much. But anyway. It was cool!. But the first volume was more of a laughable since Kevin was more provocative than here. Meanwhile the presence of her brother does make the story more serious than before. But that too is the good thing!.

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To be rebellious (volume:1)

Sister everything you told me in discord about this story is right. But just so you know I like it alot!.

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every soul will taste death

i like it! and i like how the girl Qiturah dont show any stupid feelings! i like that she didn't love at first sight! i did get tired of girls falling in love at first sight in novels!! so i like it 😁

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Devil's Attic

i like it from the first chapter! hope you always be happy author-nim!

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An Origin

its reaaaaaaally good pleace dont drop it here go on please!

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Mage One

i like it so far i just want to know what does they need to do with those children??? i will wait till then

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villains-love me hate me but dont ignore me

i like the idea its so cool

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