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Forgive Us by KylieT

Forgive Us by KylieT Well we’re do I begin….. The story was rushed, the writing definitely needs some editing. I definitely have whiplash. I’m just glad it wasn’t a long book.

MAYHEM’S PRINCESS (Hell’s Rider’s MC)

MAYHEM’S PRINCESS (Hell’s Rider’s MC) Just finished the completed story on Galatea. Had to agree with a few other readers, the writing and story were horrible. Very immature, clearly lacking experience and felt very rushed. Someone who has gone through years of abuse and rape wouldn’t just sit down in a room and “tell her story so nonchalantly” no matter who she is talking to, least of all a room full of men. (Anyone who has been a victim of abuse, rape, working in the medical field and or legal field who reads this will clearly agree this story was unrealistic.) Then there is an almost 3 year old child who hasn’t been in Mia’s presence since the delivery room, the child is immediately bonded with her biological mother and calls her “momma”, like in what lifetime does that happen. The story is absolutely non-realistic. Please do not write a book 2. I would suggest either doing a complete rewrite of the story or just trashing it.

THE ALPHA’S REJECTED MATE

THE ALPHA’S REJECTED MATE Overall I enjoyed the story and characters. Some sections seemed rushed, and some parts needed to be elaborated or built upon. Seemed to have a lot of moving parts. Rogues? Like why the attack and who were they? Kaiden was an Alpha, so what about his pack? Her brother has a pack, like how? STORY SEEMS INCOMPLETE AND LEFT WITH LOTS OF QUESTIONS. Love Cade and Kaiden. Scarlett is a little annoying and wished we had focused and had stronger story lines for a few of the other characters. I think the story is a good start. This could actually be broken into two book with a more in-depth storyline. LOVED THE AUTHORS STORY FROM KAIDEN’S DEATH ON. It was heart wrenching, I couldn’t stop crying, it pulled on my heart strings.

REJECTING THE ALPHA

REJECTING THE ALPHA You’ve got me hooked…. Need more!!! I have to say though, I like Alpha Graviel over Vander. There’s just something. He’s broken and I think she’s the only one to fix him. Together they could be amazing.

CHASING KIARRA

Loved the story and the characters. Quite a few grammatical errors but not enough for me to put the story down. I ultimately finished it on Galatea. Worth the read. It left me with some questions…. Is this a complete story or is the author still writing? Is there another book to follow/series? GIRL YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING!!!

Claiming Celia

CLAIMING CELIA Enjoyed the story immensely!! My heart broke over Morrigan and I feel for Konrad. Didn’t care how the author wrote ..... The End then did a Epilogue. The author did an injustice to the story and the characters. The story & characters are a good start, but it could be amazing. It has so much potential. LOVE GRAVE ♥️ SUGGESTION - keep writing the story, so many options. Don’t let it end!

Private Lessons

If I’m not mistaken, 4 year olds still require a car seat/booster seat. I just read the last few chapters and there seem to be a lot more grammatical and spelling mistakes than previous “chapters”. I am hooked on the characters, so I’m curious where the story is going to take us.

WHAT I NEEDED

Wow!!! Definitely one of my top 5 favorite stories. Loved it from beginning to end. A must read. 👍🏼

Twin Tormentors

Update??? When will you finish?

Landon Chambers (Billionaire Brothers # 3)

Landon Chambers (Billionaire Brothers Series 3) Ok, I’m hooked. I think Landon’s my favorite. When will you complete this story?? I hope soon🙏🏻