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Summary

There is a girl who born with a crisis and her mother sacrifices a lot for her his father and his mother in law left them cause they want a boy not a girl then she want to show to everyone and her father specially that girls are not burden to anyone

Status
Complete
Chapters
5
Rating
5.0 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

STRUGGLE OF EYE CATCHING CHAPTER 1

LIFE IS SO CRUCIAL TO UNDERSTAND....

Everyone wishes for good life. It may be at different levels. One person may portray a good life, but someone else may describe it another way For a good and healthy life person have all time meal but for another person it may be having a huge mansion of dollars in the bank.

Alena always had a wish to have a peace and prosperous life, but her fate didn't fancy her to have that life. She always felt melancholy on herself to be a woman and the blame she dupe.

Alena’s mother lived in a small rural place she was mandatory to marriage an impolite man and her mother in law was so mean to her she endeavour at home as well she go to make end meet also by execution this struggle she even don’t say any word from her muzzle but nobody cares her feelings and always make a issues in any small trifles her mother in law used to encourage his son to leave her because Alena’s mother’s marriage was not on her behalf however she managed her life but when she got to know about the good news everyone was so caring to her but when her family know about the gender there is a girl not boy so her mother in law was so enraged and timorous . She started giving a lot of work and unsuitable things to her. However she control her feelings .Alena was born in 14 march 1981 in London so she was blamed for being a woman and her mother was trying to rescue her from this criticize riddles but no her destiny was this ..

Her mother in law encouraged his son to leave his wife and daughter asper she won't give us the son who will be our money equal survivals ....

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