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Hearbreak…

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Summary

sorry if it’s not good. my first story..🤎

Genre
Romance,Poetry
Author
Paula
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Heartbroken..


I want to break

your heart in

pieces…

you don’t deserve my attention my love

my heart dearest

I gave you everything. you just put it in the trash bag.

and that makes me feel like I was just trash

for you… to throw away.

you make me feel.. bad… I wish we never met

you think you can just walk away. like u didn’t

do anyone wrong. like u can just tell me off

just your because your mad.. I hate you

I hate your face. I hate your voice..

I hate everything about you. 🤦‍♀️


you were just using me

to get what u want then u just

walked away like nothing ever happened….

like we never had anything… u suck.

I wish we never ever met cuz now I’m crying in your arms


but I met someone new and your bagging to come back.

he’s so much better then u were ever..

now u texting me saying I love you.

I want u to come back I’II be different

but now I met someone new and I’m doing good. I don’t need you. nor do I need your pity. you were the one who was playing games with my heart. and now I met someone new. you say that I never loved you and I was just playing games with your heart. but I was crying over you every day.

you broke me. you broke me you didn’t even love me. you acted like you didn’t care. you were the one who is toxic..


you was the one who said. I love you forever

and I would never want to hurt u or see you sad. when we first started dating. you loved me. you care for me. you was the best girl I ever had. but that all didn’t last. you broke me down. you broke me..


you lied. you lied about not hurting me.

you lied about loving me. you lied about caring for me. you hurt me then anyone ever did.. you broke me.


but she’s better then u ever was.

she actually cares for me. she doesn’t want to see me broken down.

you never cared. even when u said you did. you actually never cared at all. I only stayed bc I was scared of losing you. I hate you and everything you do..


you never cared about me. but she does

u never loved me. but she does

u never did anything to show u care.

but she does. I hate you.. five years of mistakes I’II never undo..

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