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Summary

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

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I could've chosen to distance myself

If only I knew you would leave me past twelve

They said, "You're much better on your own."

You laughed and surprisingly agreed while we were on the phone

I stood there in the middle of our room

I couldn't think properly; I was distracted by the smell of your perfume

Instead of having my heart break,

I'm missing you, and I know it's a mistake.

hello? Will you please go home?

I couldn't hear anything; I guess you turned off your microphone

I decided to drop the call as I laid my back on the bed

I don't want to leave you,

but right now, it's all in my head

I feel like I'm about to cry,

but there are no tears coming

But one thing is for sure, my soul is already sobbing.

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