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Llamada del mar

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Summary

Ella se sentía como un animal enjaulado. A Aliza le encantaba el mar, ver el atardecer y los barcos en el horizonte, pero nunca había salido de Hower. Tras su desesperación de seguir lo que tanto le pedía su corazón, y gracias a un misterioso hombre, encontró la manera de escapar de esa ciudad donde solo le esperaba una agonizante y miserable vida. Con un pie en el mar, conoció lo que era una vida sin ataduras y órdenes... y algunos de los peligros que se esconden en otros rincones del mundo.

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prólogo

Ante la orilla del mar había una mujer embarazada con un vestido del diario color lavanda. Su cabello revoloteaba con el viento mientras inhalaba el olor a salitre. En la mano izquierda sostenía una botella con una nota en el interior, y con la derecha, acariciaba su prominente panza.

Se limpió las lágrimas que estaban por deslizarse sobre las mejillas y se arrodilló cuidadosamente en la arena. Una vez que el mar la empapó hasta las rodillas, abrazó la botella y le dio un beso, antes de arrojarla al agua.

Hizo un puchero, y las lágrimas volvieron a caer. En sus ojos solo había tristeza y sufrimiento.

A lo lejos, el sol se ocultaba, y la botella flotaba hacia el horizonte.

Quiero volver a casa, decía la nota.

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