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La oscuridad

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La pócima del amor, como si de un brebaje se tratará, tiene una doble connotación. Una pócima puede aliviar; salvar una vida, pero también puede servir para intoxicar e incluso matar. Esta es una historia del segundo tipo de pócima. Secuela del texto: El ocaso.

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Complete
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1
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n/a
Age Rating
13+

La oscuridad

Como si fuese una serpiente, poco a poco comenzó a envolverme todo el cuerpo. Se deslizaba por mis piernas hacía mi pecho, cubriéndolo de dudas, temores e incertidumbre.

-¿Por qué será que discutimos todo el tiempo?- Pensaba.

Continuó su andar del pecho a mi garganta, apretando despacio y silenciosamente.

-¿Seremos felices juntos?- Reflexionaba.

Comenzó a invadir mis sentidos. En cualquier lugar la veía. En todas partes la escuchaba. La sentía en mi piel. La escuchaba en cada canción. La olía en el aire.

-¿Por qué si me ama, llora al verme? Dice que es porque me ama demasiado, pero ¿acaso le estaré haciendo daño?- No dejaba de preguntarme.

Pronto se alojó en mi cerebro, asfixiando toda idea, inundando todo pensamiento.

-Ella me dijo que la salvo siempre de la oscuridad que carga, pero siento como me va tragando a mí también. Como me lleva a lo peor de mí.-

Llegó a cubrirme casi por completo. Esa inmensa oscuridad. Pero, entonces resolví...

-¿Realmente la amo?-

¡SÍ!

-¿Nos hace bien estar juntos?-

¡NO!

Alberto Pascual

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