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ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.

Ashley Pierce: Touching story and great plot

JyotiRekha: Great plot Describe the life of orcos moe

NN: It got me from chapter 1. I’m sad it ended, but I loved the whole story. It was very emotional to read parts of it, and the dynamics, characters, and plot twists were amazing. I’d like to have an epilogue... 10years from now. What happened to Dewey? Even Jordan hahahaha

Ankica: I like everything, recommend to my friends, plot is interesting, main female character is great

Angela Mullen-Akporiaye: I like the banter between Aldrich and Lucy. She’s sassy and kind. He’s vulnerable and strong. There’s a verisimilitude in the way that they relate. And when he came looking for her, she didn’t shrink. Bravo!

Manjeeta Khanchandani: I liked the storyline, would share it with my sister.i see it’s 74 chapters so it’s not being dragged out for eyeball time. 4 stars only because it needs some typos fixed. It might need a more gripping start to the novel, to hook reader in

cozyshroom: Hey OkieDokie85! I'm really enjoying it so far, does the story has any arwork or visuals for the characters? I'd love to see how you picture them

smalls877: That was awesome alittle short but I loved it.