Chapter 1
Kiara
3 years ago
The sound of engines revving pierces my ears until they start to ring. The air is filled with the smell of gas, and exhaust coats the area in a thin sheen of smoke.
Itâs my favourite thing in the whole world.
My fatherâs black Ferrari gleams in the sun, and I run my fingers along the smooth surface before looking up at him.
âWhat are your bets?â I ask.
It was what I asked before every race, and every time he had different answers.
âThe red GT is sporting low tire pressure,â he said, eyeing up the car he spoke of. âAnd that Mustangâs driver looks like heâs about to hurl.â He grinned at me. âIâd say my chances are pretty high.â
I held my hand out between us, and he gripped it in his own before pulling me into a hug.
âNo losing, no dying,â I whispered, repeating the words I had said every time he got into a car.
He gave me one last squeeze. âI promise.â
He released me, and I went to my spot on the sidelines, watching as he put his helmet on and knocked the hood of his Ferrari twice. He said that it was good luck, but I thought it was just superstition.
He revved his engine once he was inside the car, showing up both cars on his sides, and I snickered to myself.
A girl dressed in the skimpiest clothes you could imagine walked to the middle of the road, giving a toothy smirk as she raised her red flag.
âRacers ready!â She called.
Cheers drowned the air in chaos.
Claps and hoots went up in volume.
The air turned tense and exciting.
The red flag went down, and all three cars took off at a stupid speed. Tires screeched, screams roared, steam clouded the entire earth, and then they were gone from view.
That was usually the time when I would butter up the judge and sway my dad to the winning side, but as I looked across the road to start that way, I saw that he was already in what looked like a very intense conversation.
With Felix Grell.
Aka, the owner of this whole racing gig.
It wouldnât have been so suspicious, except for the fact that they were both looking at me. They averted their attention as soon as our gazes collided, but the damage had already been done.
Something was up, and I was not supposed to know about it.
I walked over to them, adding a little extra sway to my hips as I did. I wasnât one for seduction, but learnt that, with these men, it was the easiest way to get what you want.
âIs there a reason weâre being so secretive over here?â I asked when I was close.
Felixâs eyes dropped to my toes and slowly worked back up to my gaze. His assessment made my skin itch.
He smirked. âJust wondering why you arenât racing today.â
Liar.
I put on my sweetest smile. âI thought it was time to let someone else win for once.â
The judge chuckled quietly, and Felixâs smirk grew.
âMy best racers donât slow down for others.â He held my eyes. âThey speed past them.â
There was something weighted in his words, but I couldnât figure it out, and I didnât get to, because the next thing I knew, a loud boom had me covering my ears and cringing.
It took only a second for me to realize that the boom was from the road, and I whipped my head around to find flames licking up the gravel only ten feet away from the finish line.
Not only gravel, but a car.
A black FerrariâŚ
I took off running. Everything was ringing and buzzing in my ears. I couldnât hear anything but my heartbeat, thudding way out of control.
âDAD!!â I shouted, like he could somehow hear me.
I was inches away from the fire when strong arms grabbed my waist.
I clawed at his arms. I recognized Felix, and that only made me fight harder.
âLet me go!â I screamed, thrashing in his arms.
âThereâs nothing you can do for him,â Felix said into my ear. âHeâs gone.â
I hadnât realized I was crying until tears started to drip onto my hands.
âHeâs not dead!â I yelled. âWe can still get him out! Please, Felix! Let me go!â
âThereâs nothing but ashes in that car, Felling.â He said, sounding remorseful. âIâm sorry.â
I stopped fighting then. Stopped everything, really, because his words finally registered.
My father was gone. My best friend was dead. My racing buddy was ashes.
Someone blew up his car, and I intended to find out who.
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Present time
My alarm pierced the silence like a machete, swift and sharp.
I rolled over, groaning, and almost slapped the clock off my bedside table.
Maybe that last chapter wasnât such a good ideaâŚ
I sat up, knowing that if I closed my eyes again I would fall back asleep. My eyes take a minute to adjust, and then Iâm up and getting dressed.
Just as I was pulling my shirt over my head, light knocking started on my bedroom door.
I swung it open to find Oliver standing there, grey eyes still drowsy with sleep.
I rubbed a hand along my forehead. âOllie, what are you doing up?â
He rubbed at his sleepy eyes. âMy window has a draft again.â
I sighed through my nose before ruffling his hair and opening my door wider. âYou can sleep in my bed while I make breakfast.â
He gave me a sleepy grin before walking inside and muttering, âYouâre the best sister ever.â
My heart warmed, and I smiled all the way downstairs.
Something about his appreciation made me feel like Iâd accomplished something today. Reagan, my best friend, called it a praise kink, but I thought I just liked having verbal feedback on the good things I do for people.
Ok, so maybe I had a praise kinkâŚ
Darkness greeted me as I took the last step on the stairs. Even the sun still slept this early. I kinda envied its position.
I flipped on the kitchen lights before going through the motions of the morning:
Make two bowls of cereal for Amir and Kaia.
Two waffles in the toaster for Oliver.
Eggs and toast for Mom, who would most likely not eat breakfast unless I forced this under her nose. She hated breakfast, but it was a personal goal of mine to make her love it. It was still a work in progress.
Gentle waves of pink and orange lulled across the sky and seeped into the windows by the time I was done. I bounded back up the stairs to complete the second part of my morning.
I opened the bedroom door on my right and flipped on the light, smiling as two sets of wide blue eyes stared back at me.
âGood morning!â I said cheerily, walking to the dresser and pulling out two outfits.
âBig truck,â Amir murmured, rubbing his face sleepily.
I furrowed my brows. âWhat?â
He pointed to the window, repeating, âBig truck.â
I turned my head to look out the window and saw that there was, in fact, a big truck there. Right next to our house. A new neighbour.
âYouâre right, Amir,â I started, trying to find any people accompanying the moving truck. âMaybe some new friends will move here to play with you.â
He stayed quiet, and I knew I had made him nervous. He was the most introverted 3-year-old you would ever meet, and I honestly couldnât blame him. Moving from six different foster homes would do that to a kid.
Pressure on my leg had my attention slipping to the koala bear known as Kaia hugging my leg. I ran my fingers through her black curls as she rested her head against my knee.
Another introverted 3 year old. It was no wonder they were twins.
âSo,â I started, putting my hands on my hips. âDo we want sunflower pants or flamingos?â
âFlowers,â Kaia muttered, smiling for the first time since I entered the room.
I tapped her nose. âThereâs that smile. Finally waking up a bit?â
She squeezed my leg tighter. âI donât wanna go to daycare today. I want to stay with you.â
My chest pinched.
I squatted down to her level. âIâll be right here when you get home.â
Her blue eyes turned pleading, and I swear I would have given in if I didnât have two demanding jobs that were awaiting my arrival.
I shook my head sadly. âNot today, girly. Iâm sorry.â
âI wanna stay home too!â Amir says, coming to stand in front of me.
I opened my mouth to speak, but running footsteps halted my words. Oliver appeared in the doorway, panting.
âI have no clean underwear,â he blurted.
And so began my chaotic morning.
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The front door slammed open with fervour, and I looked up to see Reagan standing there, seemingly composing herself.
I raised a skeptical brow. âYou doing ok?â
She widened her eyes as she slipped her shoes off. âAbsolutely not.â
I set the knife I was using to butter bread down, looking up at her expectantly.
She sighed dramatically. âYou have new neighbours.â
I nodded. âUh-huh.â
She blinked before lowering her voice, presumably for the childrenâs benefit, as she said, âIncredibly hot neighbours.â
I smiled while shaking my head. âYou think everyone with a male title is hot.â
She scoffed. âKie! You arenât getting the point! These men are jaw-dropping, mouth slapping, dramatic gasping, panties drop-â
âReagan!â I quickly interjected, gesturing to the little people in the room who had paused their eating to stare at her.
âWhy would you drop your panties in front of a man? Private parts are supposed to be only for yourself,â Oliver said, shoving another bite of waffle into his mouth.
I glared at her.
She smiled apologetically before clearing her throat. âWhat I meant was that men just love doing laundry so much, and so, while wearing another pair of panties underneath our current ones, we would drop the first pair for them to wash.â
I almost couldnât conceal my laughter as I asked, âDo you want a shovel for that hole, or are you good to continue how you are?â
âAll done!â Kaia announced, breaking the awkward silence.
I rinsed a cloth to wipe her face before taking her out of her chair. She followed me around the kitchen as I cleaned up breakfast.
âOh, Kiara!â Momâs voice rang out from the top of the stairs. âYou let me sleep in!â
I smiled as I grabbed my bag from the floor. âIt was no problem. The kid's lunches are in their backpacks and your breakfast is in the microwave.â
I bent down to kiss Kaiaâs cheek before turning to Reagan.
âThanks, hon,â My mom said, running an exhausted hand through her hair.
Always so tiredâŚ
I forced a smile. âNo problem.â
âBye, Kiara!â Little voices rang out as I opened the door, but I didnât make it two steps before my face met Reaganâs back.
âReagan, what are you-â
She turned quickly to cover my mouth with a, âShhh! Look.â
My eyes glanced to the left, and I was positive my jaw wouldâve hit the concrete if Reagan hadnât been holding it shut, because oh my goodness.
Chiselled muscles covered in sweat. Rippling tan skin. Scruff that had no right being that sexy. It was perfection incarnate.
âOh,â I breathed when she finally let my mouth go. âOh my.â
She giggled quietly. âIâm certain theyâre aliens. No one has business looking like that.â
Two men were moving boxes out of a truck, laughing and talking with each other, oblivious to the drooling girls staring at them.
Until they werenâtâŚ
Blue eyes latched onto mine, curious before they turned smug as my act was caught. He smirked before going back to his task, and my cheeks heated as I rushed to Reaganâs car.
âIt is completely unfair that I have 80-year-old grumps as neighbours and you get sex walking!â Raegan said after her car door was shut. âAbsolutely outrageous!â Her eyes turned wistful. âBut those eyes! Have you ever seen eyes so green?â
Oh, we definitely werenât looking at the same man.
I smiled as I looked out the window, muttering, âI think they looked more blue.â
A/N
Ok, drastically different from most of my stories, I know, but Iâm so excited to unleash this book into the world. Happy reading!!









Hi great author,
I recently read your book and found it absolutely fascinating. What strategies did you use to make it go viral and reach such a wide audience
Hi Book Owl,
I just finished reading your story All Revved Up and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how cool it would look as a comic.
I really loved the heart-pounding scene in the first chapter when Kiara watches her fatherâs black Ferrari speed down the street, only for the race to erupt in an explosion of flames. The imagery of the smoke, the fire licking up the gravel, and Felix holding her back would be breathtaking in illustrated form. I also adored the hilarious moment when Reagan is gawking at the new neighbors and trying (badly) to explain âpanty-droppingâ in front of the kids. Itâs the perfect blend of tension and humor, and would be ideal for making a comic as it shows both the intense action and the charming character dynamics.
Iâm a commissioned artist, and Iâd love to draw your story into a comic/manga. No pressure though, I just think your work would look awesome in comic form.
You can check out some of my recent work on my DeviantArt (Username - Ev3Verse). If youâre interested, please message me on Discord (Username - bennett_lol) so we can bring the story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!
Regards,
bennett