Escape of the Souls

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Summary

In a distant future, Earth has long become an uninhabitable, molten rock due to the Sun's massive expansion. Ononilo, a soul from the last generation of humans, remains trapped on the dying planet. As he watches the Earth melt, he reflects on life’s mysteries, particularly what happens after death. Ononilo tries to escape, but like other souls, he is held back by a dark force tied to his past mistakes. The Sun's pull becomes both a physical and spiritual test. However, as Ononilo confronts his regrets and begins to purify his soul, he slowly gains the ability to escape.

Status
Complete
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

A Soul from the Last Generation

The passage of time in the universe no longer had any meaning on Earth. The surface had become a planet where life had ceased millions of years ago. There was no atmosphere left, no water. The clouds that once surrounded the planet, the foamy waves of the seas, and the leaves swept by the winds had all vanished. With the Sun’s massive expansion, Earth had transformed into a molten piece of rock, and the last cell bearing any sign of life had turned to ash centuries ago. But the souls were still here, waiting, invisible and unfelt, beyond the realm of physical reality.

Ononilo was one of the last generation to remain on this planet. Although his physical body had long returned to the earth, his soul remained trapped here. He was just one of the many humans Earth had once hosted, but now he was lost at the edges of eternity. The Sun had grown three hundred times larger than before and had already consumed Mercury and Venus. Now, it was licking at Earth’s orbit, causing the planet to slowly melt away.

In Ononilo’s mind, the final moments of Earth echoed endlessly. In the last stages of his life, like many others, he had been searching for an answer: What would really happen after death? For thousands of years, humans had sought meaning behind life, some imagining heaven and hell, others believing in nothingness. Ononilo, however, was lost in uncertainty. He had reached the end of his life without ever finding a definite answer about what death would bring.

Even in his soul form, time continued to pass for Ononilo. Yet this time was no longer a physical measurement but rather a spiritual experience. Earth, once a massive rock that harbored life, had now become a sphere melting and evaporating under the heat of the Sun. As Ononilo watched this destruction, his soul embarked on a journey into his past.

He drifted back into his memories, trying to remember what he had lived through and what he had fought for. Once, he had breathed in a world full of life. Childhood memories, family, friends—they all came alive in his mind. The scenes unfolding before his eyes were filled with the old emotions that had once touched his soul. He could once feel the raindrops. Back then, when dark clouds gathered in the sky, the air would cool, and a strange calm would settle within him. But now, that peace had been replaced by a deep emptiness. There were no raindrops, nor clouds drifting across the sky.

Another memory slipped into his mind: When Ononilo was a young man, he had pursued the great questions that he had pondered all his life. He had wanted to understand what it meant to be human, to learn the mystery behind death. Yet throughout his life, he had never found the answers. Humanity, despite advancing technology and knowledge, had never reached a definitive understanding of death and what lay beyond. Perhaps that’s why he was now trapped here as a soul.

As the Sun slowly consumed Earth, Ononilo continued his quest in a form without a physical body. Once, the great thinkers had spoken of an escape. There were rumors that souls could move from this world to another dimension, but there had never been a clear understanding of how this would happen. Ononilo was now pursuing this escape. As the Sun’s mass and heat continued to swallow Earth, souls remained tied to the planet. Just as the Van Allen belts once protected Earth from cosmic rays, the planet’s magnetic fields were now preventing the souls from escaping. No matter how hard he tried, Ononilo could not free himself from this pull.

In his mind, ancient legends echoed, telling of how souls would be divided based on their goodness or wickedness. Some souls would be granted passage to a realm filled with light, while others would be condemned to darkness. But how this separation would occur remained unknown. Ononilo had tried to be a good person in his past life, but he had also made mistakes and carried regrets. Even in his soul form, these regrets continued to haunt him.

Days, months, perhaps even millions of years may have passed. Time no longer held any meaning for Ononilo. He could feel the Earth beginning to melt. The mountain peaks were dissolving into the ground, and even the poles were disappearing into this molten flow. His existence was trapped in the midst of this annihilation. In that moment, something began to change deep within his soul. An awareness, an awakening. Ononilo was beginning to accept that Earth’s fate was inevitable. But this realization sparked a greater search within him.

He looked around at the other souls drifting nearby. Some were still lost in their dreams and memories, while others continued to exist in their pain-filled cries. For a brief moment, Ononilo became aware of the souls around him. One by one, the spiritual beings were drifting away, some escaping swiftly, while he remained as if under the influence of an invisible force. The Sun’s flames pressed against his soul, increasing his inner restlessness.

“Escape,” a voice echoed in his mind. There was no mouth, no ears—just waves of thoughts spreading. Some of the souls around him were moving much faster than he was. Ononilo, on the other hand, seemed to be pulled back by a darkness clinging to his feet. When he looked down, he saw that his feet had turned black. He quickly understood that this darkness was related to the mistakes he had made in life. Compared to the pure whiteness of the other souls, he felt heavier.

Some souls being drawn toward the Sun appeared to be nothing more than black clouds. There seemed to be no escape for them. The Sun’s flames were devouring them. As he observed these souls, he realized something: Most of those who could not escape must have committed great evil in their past lives. Their fate was to be pulled into the Sun, condemned to eternal torment.

No matter how hard Ononilo tried, he could not completely break free from the Sun’s pull. But at one point, he noticed that the darkness around his feet was slowly fading. The Sun’s rays, while painfully squeezing his soul, were also cleansing him. The darkness had receded to his ankles. Perhaps this escape wasn’t just about external salvation but also about spiritual purification.

When Ononilo grasped this truth, the path to his escape became clearer. His speed increased, and the suffocation in his soul began to ease. The way forward had opened, but what awaited him at the end of the journey was still uncertain. The Sun, a massive ball of flame, continued to threaten his existence as his soul stood on the verge of a profound transformation.

The escape continued.