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Within Rasghadhan

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Summary

Slaves, commodities vaguely used in conveying the power of a kingdom. Rasghadhan is one with the most slaves, taking pride in acquiring survivors from conquered kingdoms, recruiting reluctantly pledged children of citizens and those with stunted growth. Mhat, an 18-year-old slave, dares to believe freedom is possible in such a kingdom, her curiosity and wit, singling her out. Perhaps It is a curse to be so outspoken as anyone might have been wiser and not disclosed their desire for an escape to someone they just met. It even is more dire when she discovers the lonely servant is rather the prince. Royalty doesn’t mix with slavery, a bitter lesson Airlen, prince of Rasghadhan must learn. But love is a vice evil, encasing its victims in the stupidity of false blindness. Airlen battles between his inner demons, loving Mhat, and pleasing his father. But there’s only so much a man can do, especially when betrayed by those trusted. Mhat will learn that slavery is not a garment befitting for her. When her genuine history is realized, a new purpose is birthed, one even love cannot prevent. She must save her people, but at what cost?

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Deevaa
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue



Mystical power was gain to those who wielded it. With it, the blind could see through darkness and the weak could conquer an army of fierce warriors. But even the most powerful of men could fall by the hand of betrayal.


No man with a rare gift showed his enemies his source of power. Of what use is power when it is caged? What use is love when it is betrayed? What is the use of the throne when it has no ruler?


Ravenhill was in shreds and their queen no more. Those once feared for their control of power, now sat in chains amongst their kingdom’s ruins.


Black smoke bled through the air, revealing the dead bodies of loved ones and the battered corpse of a once glorious land.


The ruined kingdom echoed the wails of the captured. The voices of adults and children weeping for the fallen in battle. But there was hope. For power was birthed in a child, and as long as she lived, her kingdom would rise again.


Razi stumbled to the charcoal ground. The stench of burnt flesh and blood filled his broken nose. A loud groan fell from him when his back was smashed under the heavy foot of a rival.


“Name!” The victorious warrior ordered in disgust.


“Razi.”


“Who’s the girl to you?” The man growled.


Razi’s seeing eye flashed to the crying child beside him.


Her violet eyes shined with fear and sorrow. “Mhat, a commoner.” He answered, blinking blood from his wounded sight. As they dragged them away from their Kingdom, Razi hoped his people forgave him. It was the only way to keep her safe. The little girl was their last hope.

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