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Ashen Eyes, Crimson Gaze

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Summary

In a Japan teetering between eras, a blind immortal samurai named Kiyoshi lives quietly under the care of an old man—until fate unravels his solitude. Drawn into a surreal journey, he meets Jikan, a mysterious traveler whose eyes seem eerily familiar, and Kokutan, a sentient cloth child born of grief and time. Their path winds through haunted lands and veiled memories, where time folds in on itself and nothing is as it seems. The world they wander is one stitched from sorrow, legends, and forgotten oaths—where the living and the lost walk side by side.

Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Ashen Sea

The year was 1185.

The Genpei War had eaten through the spirit of the nation. Now, its final act was poised to unfold over the swirling straits of Shimonoseki. The sky hung low, swollen with the weight of history, ready to pour its judgment upon the houses of Taira and Minamoto.

Taira Kiyoshi stood at the edge of the harbor, his bare feet pressed into the cold, damp wood of the dock as waves lapped restlessly beneath. The silver of dawn caught in his long, flowing hair—pale as moonlight—and shimmered with a ghostly hue. He was barely eighteen, yet already spoken of in hushed tones as the ashen sword of Taira. His reputation stretched far beyond the banners of his clan.

His appearance struck awe into all who beheld him: flawless white hair like woven frost, lashes of the same snow-silk shade, framing eyes of deep amethyst now muted, veiled in a dull, washed-out purple. They had once burned bright, but too many battles had dulled their luster. And still, he saw with a clarity unmatched.

A samurai of few words, Kiyoshi had not been born into greatness but had carved his way into legend through sword and silence. He was not the strongest in strength, nor the fastest in speed—but he fought with a precision that seemed divine, as if the blade moved before his thoughts.

That morning, he was not alone.

Across the water, ships were being readied. He could see the flutter of scarlet banners belonging to the Taira clan, family crests swelling like lungs in the wind. Final preparations for the naval showdown were underway.

Yet his focus was not on the fleet.

It was on the young man approaching through the mist.

Minato Daigo.

A boyhood friend. A fellow samurai.

Minato had once trained beside Kiyoshi before aligning himself with another feudal lord. The war had drawn their paths apart, but their bond had never fully unraveled. Now Daigo had come to ask for a duel.

Not one of death. But of honor.

As they met on the quiet coast, neither spoke for a long time. The only sound was the wind threading through pine needles and the faint cry of gulls.

Finally, Daigo unslung the longbow from his back and pointed toward a narrow fishing boat bobbing near the shoreline. A white flag had been fastened to its mast.

“One shot,” Daigo said. “Strike the flag, and I will accept your decision.”

Kiyoshi raised an eyebrow. “And if I miss?”

“You must promise me not to sail tomorrow.”

Kiyoshi's eyes narrowed. “I am not skilled with the bow.”

“I know,” Daigo said softly.

There was no malice in his voice. Only grief. A plea for preservation.

Kiyoshi nodded. He stepped back, drew the borrowed bow, and took aim. His breathing slowed. For a moment, the world collapsed into a single string of silence.

The arrow flew.

It missed the flag by a hair's breadth, splitting the air as it plunged into the waves below.

Kiyoshi did not look at Daigo. He returned the bow wordlessly, his gaze fixed upon the sea.

“I cannot obey your condition,” he said at last.

Daigo’s shoulders sagged. “Then I have failed you.”

“You tried,” Kiyoshi looking at him now, a different pair of eyes gazing back for a split second, he said, placing a hand on his friend's shoulder. “And that matters more than you know.”

Night fell upon the camp like a cold shroud. Soldiers gathered around fires, polishing armor and whispering farewells to those they loved. The Taira fleet had assembled under the command of their lords and nobles, while stories of the Minamoto’s cunning swirled in the dark.

In his tent, Kiyoshi sat alone with his thoughts. He had polished his blade until it shone like a sliver of moonlight, prayed before his armor, and written his death poem. It was short and without flourish:

The sea swallows all. Even the silver moonlight—Ashen and unseen.

He did not believe he would survive tomorrow. But neither did he dread it. Death, to him, was not a fearsome thing. It was only a final honor, a last performance before the gods. Such were the Tsuwamono, the Heishi of his time. Just like he was too. These brave men belonged to the time period of the strongest Samurais, when the word 'Samurai' didn't even exist yet.

And yet, something in his chest pulled tight.

It wasn’t fear. Nor regret. It was something else.

A weight that had no name.


The sun rose over the Kanmon Straits, bathing the waves in hues of molten copper. The Battle of Dan-no-ura was about to begin.

The Taira fleet moved in elegant formation, hundreds of vessels slicing through the tide. Onboard the main warship, Kiyoshi stood near the edge, armor gleaming with the red lacquer of the Heishi elite. His katana, Tsukikasumi—Moon Mist—hung at his side.

He thought of Daigo’s eyes as the sails unfurled. Of the way he had looked, begging without pride, trying to save a friend.

And yet Kiyoshi had boarded the ship.

Had chosen the path where his name might die.

Midway through the battle, the Minamoto forces began to push forward. Their archers rained hell from afar while clever tactics, and perhaps betrayal among the Taira ranks, tilted the tide.

Amid the chaos, Kiyoshi fought like a man possessed.

Even as the ocean sprayed with the blood of comrades. Even as burning arrows set sails ablaze. Even as screams and chants became indistinguishable.

He moved as if guided by some ancient rhythm, cutting through armored men with a dance-like stillness. But every swing took from him. Every kill blurred his vision. Every scream muffled the world.


Then came the arrow.


A stray. A forgotten shot.


Not even meant for him.


It struck him at the temple. The head didn't pierce deep, but enough to blind him.


His vision clouded.


Then went dark.


He fell into the sea.


They believed Taira Kiyoshi dead. No body recovered. Only whispers remained.


But the sea had not claimed him fully.


The cloth that bound his blade—the one embroidered by his mother before her death—wrapped itself around his bleeding face beneath the waves. And there, in the realm between life and death, something ancient stirred.


A breath that did not belong to man or kami.


A cloth that remembered.


A soul that would not drown.


Thus ended the tale of Taira Kiyoshi the samurai.


And unknowingly, began The legend of the Silver Ghost.

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