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The Lie She Died With

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Summary

When Loveth dies under suspicious circumstances, Evelyn refuses to accept the polished version of events. Alongside her boyfriend Thomas who’s grappling with the loss of his sister and the weight of unanswered questions. Together, they begin to unpick the threads Loveth left behind coded journals, hidden photographs, and one cryptic warning: “Don’t ever leave Thomas.” What starts as a search for closure quickly twists into something darker. Loveth wasn’t just scared she was being hunted. And the deeper they dig, the more they uncover a version of Loveth she kept hidden from everyone… a version with secrets dangerous enough to kill for.

Status
Complete
Chapters
31
Rating
4.6 5 reviews
Age Rating
16+

1. Whispers and Footsteps

The last time I saw Loveth, she was more ghost than girl.

Not the theatrical kind who glides barefoot through moonlit fields whispering tragic poetry...no.

She looked like she was being quietly erased by something no one else could see.

Her skin had gone chalk-pale, the kind of pale that makes you wonder if the sun had personally boycotted her.

Her eyes flickered...glassy, wide, horrified as though she’d witnessed something unspeakable and hadn’t yet found the words to stop screaming internally.

She muttered constantly. Not to me.

Not to anyone. Just… to herself. Like her brain was leaking. Sentences started but never ended.

Phrases like “It’s inside the walls…” and “Names first, faces second” floated in the air like bad omens.

She flinched when shadows moved.

She looked over her shoulder so often I started to think she expected Death to show up wearing Crocs and an expired driver’s license.

Then came the warning.

“Don’t ever leave Thomas. No matter what happens,” she said.

Not once. Not twice. Enough times I started mentally playing bingo with it.

By the fiftieth repetition, I laughed, awkward and dry, like someone who knew they’d just been handed the script to a funeral scene they hadn’t auditioned for.

And then, naturally, she died.

Now it all makes sense. But “now” is a bitter little time traveler who always shows up late.

We were staged in the living room like grief mannequins in a suburban showroom titled Emotional Devastation: Early Access Edition.

The silence had teeth. Everything gleamed with too much polish. The air itself felt curated.

If someone had walked in selling overpriced candles and existential dread, we’d have made a purchase.

Thomas sat beside me, folded into the couch like origami shaped by tragedy.

When he looked up, his face was wet and uneven, like he’d cried through a mask.

His sobs came in waves, messy, theatrical, a little too rehearsed.

You could tell he wasn’t sure whether he was mourning Loveth or the identity she’d stitched for him.

Mrs. Reed, his mother, perched on an armchair like grief was a hat she’d borrowed for the event.

Her posture was perfect. Her expression? Minimalist, bordering abstract.

She dabbed her eyes with slow, deliberate elegance, like she was auditioning for Best Supporting Widow.

“Evelyn, you can go home now,” she said.

Her tone was dipped in syrup and razor blades.

“I’m not going anywhere,” I replied.

Her sigh could’ve deflated a hot air balloon. It smelled faintly of contempt and furniture polish.

But I wasn’t staying to be polite. I was staying because the air itself felt haunted.

Loveth hadn’t merely died, she had unraveled. Her presence had frayed before anyone noticed.

And someone had pulled the final thread.

Earlier that morning, I found a photograph behind her bookshelf. It was torn, warped by time.

Loveth at fifteen, beside a girl with matching eyes and an expression that suggested she kicked puppies recreationally.

On the back, written in trembling cursive:

“She always said secrets rot the soul.”

I stared at that photo longer than I should’ve. The kind of staring that pulls at your spine.

The police arrived thirty-eight minutes later with all the dramatic flair of background extras.

One had a gut so committed it deserved its own badge. The other looked like he’d been battling insomnia since rotary phones. Their questions felt recycled.

“Last known sighting?” “Anyone with a spare key?” “Did she have enemies?”

Mrs. Reed spoke first. Her voice gleamed with polish.

“Loveth was an angel.”

Thomas nodded. Somewhere, an Oscar wept.

I didn’t speak. Not yet.

“Do angels beg you to protect their brothers and whisper about Death in the pantry?” I finally asked.

Sleepy Cop blinked like I’d ruined his crossword puzzle.

I repeated the phrase. He scribbled. The pen ticked like a countdown clock no one had set.

There was no cause of death. No blood. No bruises. Not a single note scrawled in eyeliner.

The autopsy promised a label; inconclusive. Which is just doctor-speak for “We’ve got nothing but goosebumps.”

After they left, Thomas turned on a cooking show. The chef screamed about basil with the urgency of someone escaping a hostage situation.

Thomas cried into a sequined pillow while a contestant yelled, “If this soufflé falls, I DIE!” I resisted the urge to applaud the irony.

Mrs. Reed took to slamming dishes in the kitchen like she was trying to summon a poltergeist. I let her.

I wandered.

Loveth’s belongings had already been boxed. Too clean. Too thorough. It was either efficiency or guilt.

I found her journal wedged under a lamp. The page was open. It read:

“He doesn’t know. He can’t. He’ll fall apart.”

I took a photo. For evidence. For memory. For fear.

Behind her wardrobe, a board creaked loose. Behind the board: an envelope.

Inside were three things:

A birth certificate missing its seal. A letter signed only with the letter V.A family tree with red Xs and ink that looked like it bled on purpose.

Loveth’s name was underlined. Thomas’s was circled. A question mark floated like it wanted to start a fight.

I hadn’t even begun to understand it. But I knew this wasn’t over.

When I returned to the living room, Mrs. Reed smiled at me from behind her magazine.

Her smile was too polished. Too white. Like it had teeth even when it didn’t.

“Find anything interesting?” she asked, like she hadn’t just buried a daughter in emotional bubble wrap.

“Not yet,” I said. And smiled back with all the warmth of a freezer door.

That night, I stayed in Thomas’s room. He curled up like punctuation, half coma, half collapse.

I didn’t sleep. I listened.

At 3:17 a.m., the front door knob moved.

Just once. A soft jiggle.

No knock. No break-in.

Then footsteps. Slow.

Then silence.

The torn photo I’d left on the table… was gone.

Loveth’s voice echoed through the back of my brain like a whisper trapped in concrete.

“Don’t ever leave Thomas. No matter what happens.”

I lay awake until dawn, heart thumping, pulse loud in my ears, waiting for the next turn of the knob.

Whatever had entered the house hadn’t come for closure.

It had come to finish what it started.

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Amazing first chapter 💜

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I just finished reading your story, and I’m honestly blown away by how immersive it is. Every scene feels alive, every emotion hits deeply, and the pacing keeps you completely hooked. Your characters are so well defined that it’s impossible not to care about them. There’s such a rare magic in your writing, it lingers even after finishing. Do you already have plans for the next part?

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