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Summary

Six turkish freinds decided to go on a vacation and rent a mansion for fun only to find that was their last stop. Will they survive or will demonica go for her feast again.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: The Joyful Procession into the Valley

The van smelled like old fries, spilled soda, and the too-sweet fog of perfume Seline had sprayed an hour ago in the name of “freshening things up.” The windows were cracked but it lingered, cloying in every breath. Six friends on the road, a tangle of mismatched personalities trapped in a steel box, chasing the promise of adventure or depending on who you asked, the promise of disaster.

“Are we there yet?” Kerem asked, his grin wide and obnoxious. It wasn’t the first time. In fact, it was the seventeenth. He kept count.

“You’ve asked that every ten minutes since we left,” Hande muttered without looking up from her book. Her voice was dry, her tone efficient, as though even her complaints were carefully measured.

“That’s because every ten minutes feels like an hour,” Kerem countered, tossing an empty chip bag toward the back seat. “Time slows down in vans. It’s physics.”

“Relativity, actually,” Sue said from the middle row, her eyes flicking up from the thick folder of notes balanced on her knees. “Though that applies to objects moving close to the speed of light. Not vans. Vans are not fast. Especially this one.”

“Still science,” Kerem replied cheerfully.

“Not science,” Sue corrected. “Misapplied science.”

“Close enough.”

“Not close enough,” Sue said, though she knew she was wasting her breath.

Ali sat by the window, hood pulled over his head, earbuds in, staring into the blur of trees outside as if the forest might give him answers. His reflection in the glass was sharp, tired, almost tragic, like he’d been cast in a role he didn’t audition for.

“You’ve been glaring at the window for half an hour,” Hayat observed from the back row, slouched so far down his seat belt looked decorative. “Blink before you dry out. You’re one sigh away from becoming a villain.”

Ali didn’t respond. He adjusted his earbuds, as though the music was enough to block out both Hayat and the world.

Seline leaned forward in the passenger seat, fiddling with the aux cord. The song sputtered and died again, leaving static. She groaned, smacking the dashboard with more optimism than logic.

“Perfect,” Ali muttered under his breath.

“Not perfect,” Seline said, still bright despite the stubborn silence of the speakers. Her smile caught the late sunlight, her hair glowing in the windshield’s golden frame. “But we’re going to a mansion! A real one. Chandeliers, secret halls, probably a grand piano missing a few keys…” She looked around, daring someone to match her excitement. “Ghosts, maybe?”

“No,” Hande said immediately.

“Yes,” Hayat said, raising one hand like a student. “But only the bad kind. Ghosts don’t do polite.”

Even Kerem laughed at that, though Ali didn’t move. Sue simply pushed her glasses up her nose and went back to her notes. Seline refused to let their gloom dampen her spark. She’d dragged them here for a reason: because they needed it. A break, an adventure, something bigger than their ordinary lives.

Kerem stretched his arms, letting out an exaggerated yawn. “Okay, let’s do this right. Everyone say what they’re hoping to find. Mansion wish list.”

“A locked library,” Sue said without hesitation. “Preferably with rare first editions.”

“An exit,” Hande muttered.

“I want a ghost butler,” Hayat added. “One that brings me snacks. Preferably chips. Because someone ate the last of mine.”

“I want silence,” Ali said flatly, still staring at the trees.

Kerem looked delighted. “And I want a hidden wine cellar. Balance restored.”

Seline laughed, shaking her head. “See? That’s why this trip matters. You’re all bringing something to the table, curiosity, skepticism, humor, silence, joy…”

“And denial,” Hande finished.

The van rattled on. Fields gave way to hills, hills to thick woods. The road grew narrow, bending like a serpent into the deepening shadows. The GPS flickered, then died completely, leaving them with only the yellow lines on cracked asphalt and the forest pressing in on either side.

“Fun fact,” Sue began, though her voice was quieter now, “this area isn’t on the updated maps. Not the official ones.”

“Cool,” Kerem said. “That means we’re off the grid. No laws, no rules. No one can stop me from peeing in the woods.”

“Kerem!” Seline scolded, though her laugh slipped through anyway.

Ali’s head finally turned, sharp eyes narrowing. “Not on maps? What do you mean?”

Sue hesitated. “Old land. The kind people build legends around. Witch trials. Missing travelers. Abandoned estates.”

“Perfect vacation spot,” Hayat said, eyes half-closed. “We’ll die in style.”

The forest thickened. Branches leaned like conspirators, whispering against each other. The air grew heavy, harder to breathe, and the jokes thinned. Even Kerem fell quiet.

When the van finally creaked to a stop, no one spoke.

The mansion loomed ahead, its silhouette jagged against the last bruised colors of sunset. Its roofline clawed at the sky, its windows glinting faintly like watching eyes. The iron gates stood open, rusted but waiting, like the jaws of something ancient and hungry.

The headlights swept over cracked stone steps leading to a door the size of a cathedral’s entrance. The wood was blackened, the brass handles tarnished to green. Ivy choked the walls, curling like veins.

For a long moment, no one moved.

Seline’s hand tightened on the dashboard. Her smile was still there, but it trembled at the edges. “We made it,” she whispered.

But the truth pressed down on all of them, heavier than the forest, heavier than the night.

They hadn’t found the mansion.

The mansion had been waiting for them.

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