What is your opinion?
OH MY GOODNESS!
"It's so hard to find authors who write short stories anymore. You are such a descriptive writer and you give good details. Your characters are interesting and I love it! You are very creative. This story is different from anything I have ever read! Please read and review my story Tales of Adventures! https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/207653/chapters/1"
Amazing!
"I am so intrigued with the plot right now - it is unreal! I usually don't go for this sort of writing (medieval times), but this brings along with it a whole new class of awesome! The suspense with the fifth floor, all the way down to the detailed songs in the town's square blew me away! I look forwards to reading more."
A gripping tale with room for improvement
"I'm sorry for the late review! "The Tower's Labyrinth" has a fantastic, gripping plot that keeps the readers going as they watch Delilah and Leonidas struggle for survival. It's a high-stakes fantasy that holds one's interest, and its twists and turns keep pages turning. However, the grammar can definitely improve. A lot of times, the wrong homophones are used (such as the wrong form of "they're/there/their") which can distract from the narrative. The syntax is clunky, and many sentences must be read through a few times to make coherent sense. The frequent use of profanity takes away from the formality of some of the characters as well. It works with characters like Delilah, who obviously has a rough and rebellious spirit, though with other characters, such as the knights and adversaries the protagonists face, it seems out of place. As for the world building, it's a bit confusing in the beginning, but it's an interesting premise. The fact that this society slaughters an entire economic class of people, save for two, would certainly cause some plot holes. For example, why does it need to be done? Has anyone tried to rebel against this system? The song that commemorates this event is a good idea, and really helps drive the story forward. It sets the stage in the beginning, and continues to be an important factor in the story. All in all, there's room to expand and improve, though this is a great start! Keep it up! -E.S. Paul"
Great start
"I think you did a great job so far! Few authors do short stories so well. Keep improving on defining the characters. So far its very engaging !"
Has Posibilities
"It is my assumption the author is either a gamer or has played Dungeon and Dragons since the plot and setting reads like a D&D game or a very rudimentary role-play. The grammar, dialogue and plot development need a great deal of editing, but I will also assume that there is some love of story telling here since you have taken great labor to write this. You have talent, but lack experience and basic writing skills. There are MANY FREE online writing/creative writing courses available; I have availed myself of some of them. It helps tremendously. Keep trying and get those skills hewn to a fine edge. Non Desistas Non Exieris~ Never Give Up Never Surrender!"
