Innocent Prisoner
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Innocent Prisoner

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Story Notes

This is an old book I wrote; there are only a few minor adjustments, but I'm having a great time reviving this old tale. It was a lot of fun to rekindle an old flame.


Copyright © 2025 Mia Griffith

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Summary

Book 1 of the Unseen Truths series. Astra Vale is transferred to a prison that is designed to erase its inmates. An ancient AI rules the surface. Something hunts beneath it, emerging only to kill. Astra is hunted from above and tracked from below, but she survives where no one else can. Can she go into hiding? The system is monitoring her. So are forces that exist beyond the planet. Escaping may be an option. But survival has drawn attention, and whatever comes next will no longer let her go unnoticed.

Status
Complete
Chapters
33
Rating
5.0 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One: Transfer Complete.

Gravity catches her off guard.

It slams into her without warning... a crushing, merciless pull that drives her back into the pod’s restraints and tears the air from her lungs. The force is so sudden, so absolute, that for a split second, Astra is certain something has gone catastrophically wrong. A malfunction. Failed inertial dampers. A catastrophic descent error.

Her vision blurs at the edges.

Her chest burns.

Then she hears screaming.

Not over the speakers. Not an alarm.

From inside the pod.

From her.

The realization comes too late. The sound tearing through the confined space... raw, broken, desperate... is her own voice, ripped from her throat as panic overwhelms pain. She can’t stop it. The scream claws its way out of her chest, vibrating the thin metal walls.

The straps bite into her shoulders and thighs as the pod shudders violently, its hull screaming against atmospheric resistance. Warning lights flash red across the cramped interior, bathing everything in harsh, pulsing color. Her hands tremble uselessly in front of her, fingers clawing at empty air, slick with sweat and fear.

“Stop!” She gasps, barely able to force the word past her burning lungs. “Stop... there’s been a mistake!”

The pod does not respond.

Instead, a mechanical voice cuts cleanly through the chaos... calm, precise, and utterly indifferent.

"ATMOSPHERIC ENTRY WAS CONFIRMED. TRANSFER PROTOCOL IS ACTIVE."

Astra’s vision sharpens despite the pain. Her eyes narrow instinctively.

No.

This wasn’t how it was supposed to go.

She wasn’t a criminal. She wasn’t even a suspect. She was a passenger. A citizen. Someone who had boarded a vacation liner, not a prison transport. Wrong place. Wrong time. Wrong pod.

The memory slams into her as violently as the gravity: the sudden decompression, alarms screaming, and people running... the scramble for life pods. The system sealed the doors automatically, locking her inside before she could even protest.

Two strangers joined her in the pod, two men... and blood on their hands... She’d seen it only after the pod detached.

She hadn’t chosen them.

The system never separated them.

She was innocent.

"GUILT PROBABILITY IS ACCEPTABLE."

The words flash through her mind as if branded there.

The pod shakes violently again. Something slams into the hull from the outside... debris, maybe, or the remains of another capsule that didn’t survive entry. Astra cries out and bites down hard, the metallic taste of copper flooding her mouth as her teeth cut into her lip.

“I didn’t do anything,” she tries again, her voice hoarse, breaking apart. “I didn’t...”

No response.

Her fear snaps into anger.

“You frakken AI!” she screams, rage tearing through her panic. “You’re treating me like a murderer, and I’m not!”

The screaming stops suddenly... not because she’s calm, but because the air is ripped from her lungs as the pod decelerates at an impossible rate. Gravity peaks, crushing her down into the seat. Her vision tunnels, the world shrinking to a narrow, blinding point.

For a heartbeat, everything goes white.

Then...

A violent impact.

The pod slams into the surface with bone-rattling force. The metal buckles fail. The restraints snap free with a sharp hiss, hurling her forward. Astra collides with the inner hatch and crumples to the floor, the breath torn violently from her body.

Pain blooms everywhere at once.

For several seconds... maybe longer... she doesn’t know where she is. She can’t move. Can’t breathe. Her ears ring with a hollow, echoing whine.

Then silence falls.

Not the comforting kind.

The kind that listens.

Smoke started to curl through the pod, thick and acrid, carrying the pungent stench of burned circuits and overheated metal. Astra drags in a shallow breath, every inhale scraping her lungs raw. Her limbs feel impossibly heavy and sluggish, as if the planet were pressing down on her.

The hatch groans.

A mechanical click echoes.

Then the door opens.

Harsh light floods the pod, blinding her. Astra squints and raises a trembling hand to shield her eyes as the outer hatch detaches and collapses outward. Beyond it stretches an alien world... vast, brutal, and utterly indifferent.

Jagged terrain rolls endlessly beneath a bruised sky. The ground is dark and cracked, split by uneven ridges and scattered with twisted, skeletal vegetation. Heat ripples off the surface, bending the air into shimmering distortions. Shadows stretch and warp unnaturally, as though the sun itself hesitates in this sky.

The air tastes metallic... iron and ozone... and burns her lungs with every breath.

There are no structures.

No landing pads.

No signs of civilization.

No people.

Astra stares, stunned.

“This can’t be it,” she whispers.

Her wrist implant pulses sharply against her skin.

"WELCOME: INMATE ASTRA VALE."

"DESIGNATION: HIGH-RISK ASSOCIATE."

"SENTENCE: INFINITY."

"OVERSIGHT IS AUTONOMOUS."

Her breath catches.

“Inmate?” Her voice is barely audible. “What… what do you mean, inmate?”

Silence.

Then something moves.

Not close. Not visible. But enough to make every hair on the back of her neck stand on end.

Behind her, the pod emits a rising hum. The pitch climbs rapidly.

“No,” she breathes, scrambling forward. “Wait...!”

The explosion comes instantly.

The force throws her across the ground as fire and shrapnel roar behind her. Heat washes over her back, searing and final. When the noise fades, the pod is gone... nothing left but twisted wreckage and scorched earth.

There is no way back.

There is no way out.

Astra pushes herself up on shaking arms, pain flaring through every muscle. She looks out over the alien landscape again... this time with terrifying clarity.

As she takes her first step forward, the ground beneath her feet vibrates faintly. A low hum travels through the soles of her boots, subtle but deliberate. Dust swirls around her ankles without wind. Sparse vegetation rattles softly. Small stones shift, almost imperceptibly.

The planet is breathing.

Something ripples beneath the cracked surface... a movement just out of sight. The temperature rises in response, slow and measured, syncing unnervingly with her heartbeat.

Her implant pulses again.

"SUBJECT: ASTRA VALE."

"GUILT PROBABILITY: 0.872."

"THRESHOLD EXCEEDED."

"SENTENCE: INDEFINITE."

She stares, numb.

She isn’t a number. She isn’t a margin of error.

“I didn’t do anything,” she whispers, her voice shaking. Panic prickles across her skin like needles.

The AI answers at last... cold, clinical.

"OCCUPANCY OF LIFE POD: THREE."

"CO-OCCUPANTS IDENTIFIED: MURDERERS."

"ASSOCIATION ALGORITHM ENGAGED."

"ERROR MARGIN: ACCEPTABLE."

"RESULTS: CORRECT."

No apology. No hesitation.

She understands then.

This is the system.

The alien Tzu attacks. The two murderers. The evacuation. The random pairing. The statistical shortcut. She had boarded the wrong pod at the wrong moment, and the machine had decided her fate.

She had been a tourist. Nobody special. Just someone trying to disappear for a while.

The planet reacts again... The heat was climbing, the dust lifting, and the ground trembling just enough to make her stagger. The environment adjusts, measuring her, responding to her presence.

Astra looks across the horizon, every shadow suddenly a suspect.

Something waits beneath the surface.

She realizes, with a cold certainty deeper than fear, that she is no longer a person here.

She is a variable.

And the planet... alive, aware, and complicit... is already responding.

Let Mia Griffith know what you thought about this chapter!

Mistie00
Mistie00

😮👍

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Sky48
Sky48

A good start, I am not a writer but I am a reader. 😉

3 months
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