Makes Me Wonder Poem by Re at Inkitt
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Makes Me Wonder Poem

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Summary

I wrote this poem about my former best friend. For reasons I don’t wanna name, we had to drift apart and for years I believed it was because she replaced me but instead I hard to face the harsh truth that she was going thru abuse and tough decisions. Now I understand her, but this poem is from the perspective of the girl (me) who didn’t yet know the truth.

Genre
Drama
Author
Re
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

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The way you left me makes me wonder,

Do trees feel how their leaves get walked over

After the wind scatters the dry ones away,

Into the end of a hot, Summer day?

Do fish grieve the mouthful,

That the dogs took from the lake?

Do killers know or understand,

That with each murder - they kill themselves?

Would the monsters still search for prey,

If they know why we hide?

Is darkness really dangerous,

Or does light simply know how to lie?

If I wasn't where I am or who l am,

If I was a planet and not a land,

Would you have chosen me instead?

If I was a hand and not a fist,

If I wasn't made of broken dreams,

Or didn't cry myself to sleep,

Would you still not have chosen me?

If I was dead, would you not grieve,

Or why do you act like you won't?

If I left before you did,

Would I not have won?

Would it not hurt any less,

Or be sweeter to forget?

Sharks don't know that not everything that bleeds

Is a meal designed to eat.

People like you don't know

Who to hurt and who to keep...

You don't hurt what you want to keep.

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There’s something truly magical about your writing. Every scene and detail is crafted so beautifully that the reader feels like a part of the story. The emotions come across as raw, genuine, and deeply touching.

8 months

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