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Imaginatively

"Stunning author style! Everything seems so vivid when you read this story. I like how every event so far really seems to be well thought out. The characters feel so real and raw. Keep up the good work! "

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Leo: Between The Four Sons

"Stunning read, with great visualizing descriptions. You fall in love with the characters and the plot is great. This story and author has a great future ahead. Looking forward to a sequel."

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Leo: Between the four sons

"Satyrs, Fairies, Armies, Kings, Swords,Griffins...What else does a person need for a good story?? Nothing, I can assure you of that!!! The descriptions are so lovely that you can picture everything in your head too, so that's an extra bonus!!"

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Leo

"This book had me drawn in pretty fast. Loved the plot and just the whole story in general was great! Look forward to reading more from this author!"

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Good read

"Liked the plot of the story. It is engaging."

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Leo

"Just a great read! Honestly was not expecting the story to be this way. I was hoping there would be a sequel"

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Leo:Between The Four Sons

"I liked the plot twist."

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Leo between the 4 sons

"Very interesting so far."

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Amazing! Love it

"I really like your book that you have written I can't what to read more of you and hope that you continue writing"

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Compelling!

"We follow a simple farm boy, Leo, on the cusp of adulthood as he navigates a horrible tragedy and crime committed to his lifelong village. A true fantasy, this story has magic, stories, creatures, and adventures. It is a lovely draft. I love the plot, I love the characters. With a thorough editor, this story has an impressive future ahead!"

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Fun Read

"Leo Between the Four suns is a fantastical read. If you enjoy being immersed into a fantasy realm this will be your kind of treat. At the same time though the Author needs to be wary of showing vs telling. Slowing down on the world building and descriptions. And provide emphasis on the conflicts and actions that arise. Fixing these minor details will essentially make this piece of work almost flawless. Keep up the good work Collins! Cheers!"

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Promising! :)

"My only advice is to bookmark either www.grammarcheck.com or www.online-spellcheck.com. They help me. :"

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love this!

"I am loving how this story has started out! I agree with one of the other reviewers though....that you could make a lot more out of introducing all the fantastical creatures. But overall, a great story!"

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A Thrilling Plot

"This story has great potential and blazes with action. I can see it becoming a great hit!"

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Fantastic!

"This book is an absolute must read! It is intriguing and wonderful, I could not put it down. The author gives you just enough pieces of the story to leave you wanting more and more. Excellent and unexpected twists and turns! Leo: Between the Four Sons is truly incredible. The world in which these characters live is so well described that it comes to life. The characters are so lifelike and relatable, I love the friendship between Leo and Katherine! You will easily grow attached to the characters and creatures. Well worth the read. Congratulations to HK Collins may this story take you to amazing places."

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Antioenette van Hengel

"Awesome !!!!"

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Entertaining

"Praise to H. K. Collins for bringing this fun fantasy/ adventure to life. As I started reading, the story just seemed to become a part of me. From the moment we meet Leo where he doesn't at all seem attached to his home town, all the way through to the end, when you could feel him grow more confident. The book also gives you a great hero and herione, which you don't see a lot. There are some grammer problems here and there but nothing that can't be fixed with a good edit. I think Leo: Between The Four Sons has the potential to be one of those novel series's where people won't be able to wait for the next instalment. I say it's a must read."

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Great!

"Leo: Between The Four Sons leads us into a new fantasy world that hasn't been seen before, without being to over the top. It brings together so much. It takes in account the power of family, love and friendship while also showing the loss, hate and sadness in the world. I loved how the array of strange characters mix together, with everyone diffrent, but how they are united by things to one another which is very smart. The writer really makes it easy to imagine everyone and everything, which sometimes is hard for a fantasy. I would definitely recommend this novel with a big smile."

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Leo: Between The Four Sons

"I enjoyed the novel a lot. The way the book moves forward, just giving you enough to continue reading. The characters are interesting and some overly elaborate, which I loved. The idea behind the book and how good and evil are interacted as Leo and Katherine come to find the heroes inside them gives it a real feeling. There are some grammer errors but after some rounding the book will be brilliant. I just want to know what happens next after everything that had happened. All in all a big thumbs up!"

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Between the four sons

"Hungry for more."

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