Mystery the story of the hotel

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Summary

Some sounds should be ignore

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Complete
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13+

Mystery the story of the hotel

The highways of America stretched endlessly before me, disappearing into a curtain of rain that blurred the world into shades of grey. It was late at night, the kind of night when the road seemed deserted and even the streetlights looked tired. I was driving alone, heading toward my friend Daniel’s house in a nearby town. The rain had started gently, tapping against the windshield like cautious fingers, but now it had grown heavier, drumming loudly as if trying to warn me about something ahead.

The wipers moved back and forth tirelessly, yet they couldn’t fully clear the mist forming on the glass. The radio played a soft tune, but the sound felt distant. I glanced at the clock on the dashboard. It was almost midnight. I sighed and leaned forward slightly, trying to focus on the road. A few cars had passed me earlier, but now I seemed to be the only traveler on the highway.

Suddenly, a loud thunderous crack broke the silence. It sounded as if something heavy had struck the roof of my car. The steering wheel vibrated slightly in my hands, and I instinctively pressed the brakes. The car slowed, and I pulled over to the side of the road. My heart was beating faster than before.

“What was that?” I muttered to myself.

I switched off the music and listened carefully. Only the rain answered me. I stepped out of the car, immediately feeling the cold drops soaking through my jacket. The road looked even lonelier from outside. I walked around the vehicle and froze. A thick branch from a nearby tree had fallen and hit the back of my car. It wasn’t very large, but it had damaged something near the rear. I tried starting the engine again, but it coughed weakly and fell silent.

“Great… just great,” I said under my breath.

I checked my phone. No signal. The rain intensified, and the wind whistled across the empty land. I looked ahead and noticed a faint light in the distance. It seemed to come from a building. With no other choice, I grabbed my bag and started walking.

The road felt endless. The rain soaked my clothes completely, and the cold air made me shiver. After about ten minutes, the shape of the building became clearer. It was an old hotel standing alone in the middle of a vast moorland. The structure looked ancient, with cracked walls and dim lights glowing from a few windows. There were no other buildings nearby, no cars, no signs of life.

I hesitated for a moment. Something about the place felt strange. But the rain pushed me forward. I climbed the small steps and opened the creaky wooden door. The lobby was dimly lit, filled with antique furniture covered in dust. A large chandelier hung from the ceiling, but only two bulbs were working. The air smelled old, like forgotten books and damp wood.

Behind the reception desk stood a thin man wearing a faded uniform. He looked up slowly and smiled.

“Hello, sir,” he said in a soft voice. “You are highly welcome to our hotel.”

His voice echoed slightly, as if the room was bigger than it looked. I nodded politely.

“Thank you. Can I get a room for one night?” I asked.

“Of course,” he replied. He handed me an old brass key. “Room 307. Third floor.”

I frowned slightly. “Is there an elevator?”

“There is,” he said calmly, “but sometimes it doesn’t work. You may take the stairs.”

I didn’t like the sound of that, but I accepted the key. As I turned, I noticed something odd: there was no other guest in the lobby. The silence felt heavy. Even the ticking clock on the wall sounded too loud.

I climbed the stairs slowly. Each step creaked beneath my feet. The corridors were long and dim, with portraits of unfamiliar faces hanging crookedly on the walls. Their eyes seemed to follow me as I walked.

Finally, I reached Room 307. I unlocked the door and stepped inside. The room was simple: a bed, a table, a chair, and an old wardrobe. There was a faint smell coming from the bathroom, but I was too tired to care. I washed my face and sat on the bed.

Outside, the wind howled. I tried to relax, but something felt wrong. I opened my laptop to do some work, hoping to distract myself. After a few minutes, I noticed a shadow moving outside my door. I looked up quickly.

Someone was standing there.

I got up and opened the door, but the hallway was empty. I stepped back inside, confused. A moment later, I heard a slow banging sound. It came from somewhere down the corridor.

Bang… bang… bang…

My heart started pounding. The sound grew louder. It felt like someone was knocking on doors one by one. I swallowed nervously.

“Probably another guest,” I whispered to myself, though I wasn’t convinced.

The banging stopped suddenly. Silence returned. I locked the door and lay down on the bed. After a long time, I drifted into an uneasy sleep.

When I woke up, sunlight was faintly filtering through the curtains. I stretched and realized something strange. I wasn’t in my bed. I was lying on the stairs of the second floor.

I sat up quickly, confused. How did I get there? I clearly remembered sleeping in my room. I stood and looked around. The hotel was silent again.

“This place is weird,” I said softly.

I walked down to the reception. The same man stood there. I told him everything. He listened without expression.

“Strange,” he said. “But perhaps you were sleepwalking.”

I wasn’t convinced, but I nodded. I decided I would leave as soon as my car was fixed.

However, deep inside, I felt that the hotel was hiding something… something mysterious and unsettling. And I had a feeling that my stay there was far from over.

I stood at the reception desk, watching the thin man carefully. His expression remained calm, almost too calm, as if nothing unusual had happened. The faint smile on his face didn’t change, and that made me uneasy.

“Sleepwalking?” I repeated. “I’ve never sleepwalked in my life.”

“Sometimes new environments cause unusual behavior,” he replied softly. “You must have been very tired.”

Maybe he was right. Maybe I was overthinking. But deep down, I felt something wasn’t normal. I decided not to argue. Instead, I asked, “Is there any mechanic nearby? My car broke down last night.”

He shook his head slowly. “The nearest town is about fifteen miles away. There is a telephone in the lounge. You may try calling from there, but the line works… occasionally.”

Occasionally. That word didn’t comfort me.

I walked toward the lounge. It was a large room with old sofas, dusty curtains, and a fireplace that looked like it hadn’t been used in years. A black telephone sat on a small table. I lifted the receiver. No dial tone. I tapped it gently. Nothing.

“Perfect,” I muttered.

I sat down on one of the sofas. The hotel was silent again. Too silent. I could hear my own breathing. Suddenly, I noticed something strange. On the wall opposite me hung a large painting. It showed the hotel itself, surrounded by fog. But there was something unsettling about it — a shadowy figure stood in one of the windows.

I leaned forward. The figure looked familiar… like someone watching from inside.

I stood up and moved closer. The paint seemed old, cracked. I tilted my head slightly. The figure looked like a person in a long coat. Its face wasn’t clear. I stepped back, feeling uncomfortable.

“Do you like the painting?”

I jumped. The receptionist stood behind me silently.

“It’s… interesting,” I replied.

“It has been here for many years,” he said. “This hotel has a long history.”

“What kind of history?” I asked.

He paused. “Many travelers have stayed here. Some… longer than expected.”

Before I could ask more, he turned and walked away. His footsteps echoed down the corridor.

I rubbed my arms, feeling a chill. I decided to return to my room and pack my things. I didn’t want to stay longer than necessary.

As I climbed the stairs, I noticed something odd again. The corridor on the third floor seemed longer than before. I was sure my room was near the staircase, but now I had to walk farther. The portraits on the wall looked darker. One of them caught my attention. It showed a man who looked very similar to the receptionist.

I stopped. The painting looked old, maybe decades old. Was it the same person? That didn’t make sense.

I reached Room 307 and opened the door. My bag was exactly where I left it. I started packing quickly. As I folded my clothes, I heard a faint whisper.

“…hello…”

I froze.

“Hello?” I called.

No answer.

I walked to the door and opened it. The hallway was empty. I closed it again. The whisper returned, softer this time.

“…help…”

The sound seemed to come from the bathroom.

My heart raced. I slowly pushed the bathroom door open. Nothing. Just the small sink, mirror, and shower curtain. I pulled the curtain aside. Still nothing.

“I’m imagining things,” I said, though my voice trembled.

I splashed water on my face and looked at myself in the mirror. For a split second, I thought I saw someone standing behind me. I turned instantly.

No one.

I stepped back, breathing heavily. This place was playing with my mind.

I grabbed my bag and decided to leave immediately. As I walked toward the stairs, I heard footsteps behind me. Slow, deliberate footsteps. I turned around. No one was there.

The footsteps continued.

I started walking faster. The stairs seemed farther away. Suddenly, a door slammed loudly somewhere down the corridor. I jumped.

“Okay, that’s it,” I said. “I’m leaving.”

I hurried down the stairs. When I reached the lobby, the receptionist wasn’t there. The front door was slightly open. I pushed it and stepped outside.

The rain had stopped, but the sky remained cloudy. The road looked deserted. I walked toward where I had left my car. After ten minutes, I reached the spot. My car was still there, but something felt wrong.

The branch that had hit my car was gone.

I looked around. The tree stood nearby, but no broken branch lay on the ground. I frowned. Maybe someone had moved it.

I tried starting the engine again. To my surprise, it started smoothly.

“What…?” I whispered.

Everything worked perfectly. It was as if nothing had happened.

I sat inside my car, gripping the steering wheel. The engine was running smoothly, as if nothing had ever happened. The rain had stopped, and the sky looked pale and silent. I should have driven away immediately. That would have been the logical thing to do. But something pulled me back — a strange curiosity mixed with fear.

I looked at the hotel in the distance. It stood quietly, almost peacefully, as if it had never caused any trouble. For a moment I wondered if everything that happened was just my imagination. Maybe I was tired. Maybe the storm had confused me.

But then I remembered waking up on the stairs.

“No,” I whispered. “Something isn’t right.”

I stepped out of the car again. The air felt cold. I walked back toward the hotel slowly, unsure why I was returning. Perhaps I wanted answers. Perhaps I didn’t want to leave without understanding what had happened.

When I entered the lobby, the receptionist was not at his desk. The room looked darker than before. The chandelier flickered slightly. I called out, “Hello?”

No response.

I moved closer to the desk. The old register book lay open. I glanced at it casually. My name was written on the top line. But below it, I noticed something strange. There were many names written underneath — some faded, some recent. Next to several names, there was no checkout date.

I flipped a few pages. More names. More blank checkout columns.

A chill ran down my spine.

“Looking for something?”

I turned. The receptionist stood behind me again, silently.

“Just… checking,” I replied nervously.

He closed the register gently. “You were leaving, weren’t you?”

“Yes… I mean… I thought I would,” I said. “But I wanted to ask something. Has anyone else… experienced strange things here?”

He tilted his head slightly. “Strange is a relative word.”

“That’s not an answer.”

He smiled faintly. “Every place has its own… personality.”

Before I could ask more, he added, “You may stay another night if you wish. The weather may turn bad again.”

I didn’t like the idea, but the sky outside had already grown darker. Thick clouds gathered again, and wind began to blow. It seemed another storm was coming.

Reluctantly, I nodded. “Just one more night.”

He handed me the same key.

Room 307.

I hesitated. “Can I get another room?”

“All other rooms are unavailable,” he replied calmly.

I didn’t see any other guests, but I accepted the key anyway.

As I climbed the stairs, I felt heavier with each step. The corridor seemed quieter than before. I unlocked my room and stepped inside. Everything looked the same. I placed my bag on the table and sat down.

The wind howled louder outside. The lights flickered once.

I decided to stay awake this time. I didn’t want to repeat what happened the previous night. I made some coffee using the small kettle in the room. The bitter taste helped me stay alert.

Hours passed slowly. Around midnight, I heard something again.

Soft footsteps in the corridor.

I walked to the door and pressed my ear against it. The footsteps stopped. Silence.

Then, a faint knock.

Not on my door — somewhere farther away.

Knock… knock… knock…

It sounded rhythmic. I opened the door slightly and looked outside. The corridor was dim. At the far end, I saw a figure standing near the window.

A tall shadow.

It didn’t move.

“Hello?” I called.

The figure slowly turned. I couldn’t see its face. My heart pounded loudly. I took a step forward. Suddenly, the lights went out.

Darkness swallowed everything.

I froze. The only sound was the wind outside. Then I heard whispering again.

“…come…”

“…downstairs…”

The voice seemed to echo in my head.

The lights came back. The corridor was empty.

I hurried back into my room and locked the door. My hands trembled. I tried to calm myself, but then I heard something inside the room.

The wardrobe door creaked open slightly.

I stared at it.

It moved slowly… inch by inch.

I stepped back. “Who’s there?” I asked.

No answer.

I gathered courage and pulled the door open fully. Inside, only my clothes hung quietly. Nothing else.

I closed it quickly.

Suddenly, a loud bang came from the ceiling. Dust fell slightly. I looked up. It sounded like footsteps above me.

But I was on the top floor.

My breathing became shallow. I couldn’t take it anymore. I decided to leave the room and go downstairs.

The corridor seemed colder. As I walked, I noticed something on the floor. Wet footprints. They led from the staircase… toward my room.

I followed them slowly. They stopped right outside my door.

My heart almost stopped.

I ran down the stairs. When I reached the lobby, I saw the receptionist sitting calmly, reading a book.

“You’re awake late,” he said.

“There’s someone on the third floor,” I said breathlessly.

He closed his book. “There are no other guests on that floor.”

“I saw footprints. I heard footsteps.”

He looked at me carefully. “Perhaps you should rest.”

“I am not imagining this!” I said.

He stood up slowly. “Would you like me to check?”

I nodded.

We climbed the stairs together. When we reached the third floor, the corridor was completely dry. No footprints. No sound.

“You see?” he said softly.

I stared in disbelief. I was sure I saw them.

We returned to the lobby. I felt exhausted. My mind was confused. I sat on the sofa and leaned back.

“You should sleep,” he repeated.

“I don’t want to go back to that room.”

“You may sleep here,” he offered.

I agreed. I lay down on the sofa. The ticking clock echoed again. Slowly, my eyes closed.

When I woke up, I felt cold. I opened my eyes.

I was not in the lobby.

I was standing in a long corridor I had never seen before. The walls were cracked. The lights flickered weakly. Doors lined both sides.

I looked around, confused.

“Hello?” I called.

A door at the end opened slowly.

A faint voice whispered, “…help us…”

I walked toward it, unable to stop myself.

And then I realized… I was no longer sure whether I was awake… or still trapped inside the mystery of the hotel.

Writing.

The corridor stretched endlessly before me. The walls were cracked, the paint peeling like old skin. A faint yellow light flickered above, buzzing softly. I wasn’t sure how I got there, or even if I was still dreaming. But the cold air felt real. The silence felt real.

At the end of the corridor, the door that had opened slowly now stood half ajar. A dim light spilled from inside. The whisper came again.

“…help us…”

My legs moved forward almost on their own. Each step echoed loudly. I reached the door and pushed it gently. It creaked open.

Inside was a small room filled with old furniture covered in white sheets. A dusty mirror hung on the wall. In the middle of the room stood a wooden chair. On it lay an old guest register book — similar to the one at the reception.

I walked closer and opened it. Names filled the pages. Some looked faded with age. Others seemed recent. I scanned them quickly.

Then I froze.

I saw my name again — written in dark ink.

Below it, the checkout column was blank.

My heart began pounding. I flipped more pages. Some names had small notes beside them:

“Never left.”

“Stayed.”

“Returned.”

“What is this?” I whispered.

The mirror behind me suddenly cracked with a sharp sound. I turned quickly. My reflection looked pale. For a second, I thought I saw someone else standing beside me — a shadowy figure.

I spun around.

No one.

The door slammed shut behind me. The light flickered violently. Panic rose in my chest. I ran to the door and pulled it open. The corridor outside looked darker now.

Suddenly, I heard footsteps approaching from both sides.

Slow… dragging… footsteps.

I started running. The corridor seemed longer. The lights turned off one by one behind me. I reached a staircase at the end and rushed down.

When I reached the bottom, I found myself in the hotel lobby again.

The receptionist stood there, exactly as before.

“You shouldn’t wander,” he said calmly.

“What is happening?” I shouted. “What is this place? Why is my name in that book?”

He looked at me for a long moment. Then he sighed.

“This hotel… keeps memories,” he said.

“That doesn’t explain anything!”

“Many travelers come here,” he continued. “Some leave. Some… become part of it.”

My hands trembled. “You mean… trapped?”

He didn’t answer directly. “The hotel shows people what they fear… or what they seek.”

“I don’t want any of this,” I said. “I’m leaving now.”

He nodded slowly. “You may try.”

I didn’t wait. I rushed outside. The sky was grey again, but no rain fell. I ran to my car. The engine started immediately. I drove fast, not looking back.

The road stretched ahead. My heart slowly calmed. After a few minutes, I saw a signboard:

“Town — 15 miles.”

Relief washed over me. I kept driving.

But after ten minutes, something felt wrong. The road looked familiar. Too familiar.

I slowed down.

Ahead… I saw the hotel again.

“No… no…” I whispered.

I turned the car around and drove the opposite direction. The road curved through the moorland. I kept driving faster.

Again, after several minutes… the hotel appeared.

It was impossible.

I stopped the car. My hands shook. The engine suddenly died. Silence surrounded me.

I stepped out slowly. The hotel stood silently, waiting.

I walked back toward it, exhausted. When I entered the lobby, the receptionist looked at me with the same calm expression.

“You see?” he said softly.

“There’s no way out?” I asked.

“There is always a way,” he replied. “But it depends on you.”

“What does that mean?”

He pointed toward the staircase. “Sometimes, the hotel lets go.”

I didn’t understand, but I climbed the stairs again. The corridor felt different now — quieter, almost peaceful. I reached Room 307 and entered.

The room looked normal. Sunlight streamed through the window. I walked toward it. Outside, I saw my car parked… but the sky was bright blue.

Was it morning?

I blinked. The view looked normal — no moorland, no storm. Just a regular roadside.

I opened the door slowly and stepped out of the room.

The corridor was brighter. The portraits looked less eerie. I walked downstairs.

The reception desk was empty.

The front door stood open.

I stepped outside. The road looked clear. My car keys were in my hand. I got in and started the engine.

It worked.

I drove forward. This time, the road didn’t loop. After fifteen minutes, I reached a small town. People walked normally. Cars passed by. Everything looked real.

I stopped near a gas station and got out. My legs felt weak. A man nearby noticed me.

“You okay?” he asked.

“Yes… I think so,” I replied.

“Where did you come from?”

“There’s a hotel back on that road,” I said, pointing.

He frowned. “Hotel? There’s no hotel there. That building burned down years ago.”

My stomach tightened. “Burned down?”

“Yeah,” he said. “Strange story. People used to say travelers disappeared there. After the fire, nothing remained. Just empty land.”

I felt cold.

I looked back at the road. In the distance… there was nothing.

No hotel.

Only open land.

I drove away slowly. Hours later, I reached my friend’s house. I told him everything. He listened quietly.

“That sounds like a nightmare,” he said.

“Maybe it was,” I replied.

That night, I tried to sleep. But something kept bothering me. I reached into my pocket.

The brass key.

Room 307.

I stared at it, frozen.

The next morning, I checked my bag. Inside… I found a small piece of paper I had never seen before.

It read:

“Thank you for staying. You may return anytime.”

Below it… my checkout date was written.

But the ink looked fresh… as if it had just been added.

I slowly placed the key on the table. The sunlight felt warm, but a chill remained inside me.

Because deep down, I knew one thing —

Some places don’t disappear.

They just wait… for the next guest.