Customize readability
Aa

The Time Bender

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

My name is Shula Garcia Rivera and my family is not exactly human as you will see soon. Let me explain what happened on that morning that lasted only a moment in time during the year I thought Lily had disappeared. A magical creature came to live in the clearing at the center of our land.

Status
Complete
Chapters
9
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Shula

My name is Shula Garcia Rivera and my family is not exactly human as you will see soon.

The land we the Star Seed Tribe live on, belonged to our family for generations. It is passed down to the women in our family. It rightfully belonged to my mother Sonia Garcia Rivera. I was next in line as her only daughter to inherit and care for the land as her mother had before her.

Let me explain what happened on that morning that lasted only a moment in time during the year I thought Lily had disappeared.

A magical creature came to live in the clearing at the center of our land.

The center of the land is where our clearing is located and it is found along a ley line of power that is one of the chakras of the Earth. A secret place that has yet to be discovered by man. Like the human beings that inhabit the land of earth, a reflection in a pool of water that mimics its surroundings symmetrically, the Earth also has several chakras or energy centers.

I never learned the magical creatures name nor exactly what the magical creature could accomplish with It’s personal power. As suddenly as It had appeared, It left. Leaving us with only a memory of its presence and a feeling of misplaced time.

When my father Herman Garcia Rivera discovered it on that starry morning, it was almost too late to ask for It’s help to teach its magic to the five little girls apprenticing with us in our home. We were always open to learning and taking advantage of a presented opportunity. During that moment in time It had already lived a lifetime between Its arrival/departure. It was preparing to leave just as it had arrived; in the blink of an eye.

Let Morgan Peterson know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

Hello, I would like to invite you to join writing competition. Can I DM you through your social media so I can explain it more in detail?

4 years

Further Recommendations

The Luna Trials

Jamie Zahra: i like everything about this book, keeps me on edge at the same time curious and interested

Read Now
A Blessing in Disguise

Miriam0011: Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your story, it was both interesting and well written. Your style feels very natural and easy to connect with. Do you usually write in this genre, or do you explore others as well?

Read Now
Silver's Second Chance

Clare: Loved the second chance mate story line. But loved even more the strong female lead. Would love to a mini fic of this couple a few years down the line.

Read Now
His Forsaken Fate

Bargara4670: I have marked the ratings down because it was obviously originally written in a foreign language and translated into English. I hope that whoever edited the second half will go back and do the same to the first half. Having said that, this was a well-thought-out plot which kept me interested enough ...

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

Authorhelper: Your story sounds really interesting! As a beta reader and book editor, I love helping writers strengthen plot, pacing, character depth, and overall flow while keeping their unique voice. I’d genuinely be interested in reading more of this project.

Read Now
Fated to My Ex- Best Friend

Authorhelper: Your story sounds really interesting! As a beta reader and book editor, I love helping writers strengthen plot, pacing, character depth, and overall flow while keeping their unique voice. I’d genuinely be interested in reading more of this project.

Read Now
My Blacksmith Savior

Mieha: Nice story, it keep me interested to continue Reading. i don't feel bored at all. Good job!

Read Now
The Argent Wolf (Coming to Galatea)

BlackKat07: I loved the characters, and the settings were described really well, making it easy to picture in my mind. One question I have - when the creature attacked the city, why did the wolves attack it in their wolf forms, instead of in their human forms with the amazing weapons they had. And where did...

Read Now
My Best Friend Forgot to Mention the Werewolves

Redpea: This story was gentle,funny and sweet I liked that the characters took their time. The sister character was hilarious my favorite by far, I can't wait to read her story. This was a great read I will recommend it to my friends.

Read Now