The Language Of Destiny by Sagun at Inkitt
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The Language of Destiny

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Summary

Two strangers. One lift. Twenty-seven seconds that change everything. Abhishek Malhotra has built a life of control, silence, and distance after a past that broke him beyond repair. Ashnoor “Noor” Gill believes in love that is deep, pure, and meaningful — something that cannot be rushed or temporary. They were never meant to notice each other. But destiny doesn’t always ask for permission. Some connections are not loud. They are felt… in silence. And sometimes, a single moment is enough to rewrite everything.

Genre
Romance
Author
Sagun
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1Twenty-Seven Seconds

The digital clock on the gym wall read 9:52 PM.

Three hours.

Abhishek Malhotra never worked out for three hours.

Two and a half — sharp.

Structured. Timed. Controlled.

Control was his thing.

Sweat dripped from his jaw as he lifted the barbell again. His muscles burned, but the ache felt familiar. Safe. Physical pain was easier to manage than the kind that lived in the chest.

“Last set, Abhi,” his trainer called out.

He nodded.

But his mind wasn’t there.

It was stuck in a lift.

A quiet lift.

Soft yellow lighting.

And a girl with a blue bow in her hair.

He dropped the weights back onto the rack with more force than needed. The metallic sound echoed. A few people turned to look.

He exhaled slowly.

What was wrong with him?

Six years.

Six years ago, he had decided something — no distractions. No emotional risks. No attachments beyond the small circle he trusted. His mother. His two sisters in Bengaluru. His five friends who had been with him since the beginning of his career.

That was enough.

It had to be enough.

He walked toward the mirror. His reflection stared back — calm, unreadable, strong. That’s what people saw.

They didn’t see the walls.

They didn’t see how carefully he had built them.

And then… last night happened.

He could still see her.

Not perfectly. Not every detail.

But her eyes.

There was light in them. Not loud. Not dramatic. Just… warm. Alive. The kind of light you don’t notice until you’ve been living in dim rooms for too long.

He grabbed his water bottle and took a long sip.

“Why am I smiling?” he muttered under his breath.

Because he was.

Subtly. Without realizing it.

He hadn’t smiled like that in years.

The treadmill beside him started running, but he stood still, lost again in that 27-second memory. The way she looked at him — not impressed, not intimidated… just curious.

And when the lift doors opened, she had given him the faintest smile.

Polite. Soft.

But real.

Something inside him had shifted.

It scared him.

He had worked too hard to become this version of himself — steady, untouchable, focused.

And now all it took was one girl.

One lift.

One blue bow.

“Abhi?” the trainer called again. “You zoning out today.”

He forced a straight face. “Just tired.”

But he wasn’t tired.

He was distracted.

And for the first time in six years…

He didn’t hate it.

The digital clock on the gym wall shifted from 9:52 to 9:53 AM.

Abhishek adjusted his grip on the dumbbell… but his mind wasn’t counting reps anymore.

It was replaying a moment.

Across the city.

In a quiet apartment washed with soft morning sunlight…

An alarm had been ringing for almost five minutes.

The girl on the bed was awake.

She just hadn’t opened her eyes yet.

Her name was Ashnoor Gill.

But very few people called her that.

For her parents, she was “beta.”

For teachers, “Ashnoor.”

But for almost everyone who truly knew her—

She was Noor.

Because when she was born, her dadi had looked at her tiny face and said,

“Iski aankhon mein noor hai.”

And the name stayed.

Noor turned slightly on her side, sunlight touching her cheek.

Her room was peaceful. Organized. Calm.

Just like she appeared to be.

Single child.

Loved deeply. Protected carefully.

People thought that meant easy.

It didn’t.

Some things shape you quietly.

Some memories don’t need to be loud to stay.

Her alarm stopped.

Silence filled the room.

And in that silence—

He appeared again in her thoughts.

The lift.

The soft yellow light.

The boy in black.

She hadn’t expected to remember him.

But she did.

The way he had stood — straight, controlled.

The way he hadn’t fidgeted.

The way he hadn’t tried to impress.

Most people try too hard in small spaces.

He hadn’t tried at all.

And somehow… that stayed.

Noor slowly opened her eyes.

“It was just a lift ride,” she whispered.

Just 27 seconds.

Nothing more.

In the gym, Abhishek looked at his reflection again.

He told himself the same thing.

Nothing.

Bas ek random moment.

Across the city—

Two people.

Two separate worlds.

Same morning.

Same memory.

Neither of them knew the other’s name.

Neither of them knew their paths would cross again.

But somewhere deep inside—

Both of them felt it.

Some encounters don’t feel new.

They feel… familiar.

And sometimes—

Familiar things don’t leave easily.

Chapter 1 ends.

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